Nov. 24, 2020
I woke up a little past 4 this morning again. There was nothing I could do at the time. I usually open some language apps and spend time on them. This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw if anyone corrected them. If a journal is corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changes. Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copying the correct passages is very beneficial for my writing. In the end, I said thanks sincerely to the person who corrected me. In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it would not bother others. In fact, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people, because I am not staying alone. So, almost all the time, I could write in any case.
I woke up a little past 4gain this morning againt a little past 4.
I woke up again this morning at a little past 4.
There was nothing I could do at the time.that early in the morning.
There was nothing I could do that early in the morning.
I usually open some language apps and spend time on them.learning.
I usually open some language apps and spend time learning.
This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw to see if anyone had corrected them.
This morning, I checked all my posted journals to see if anyone had corrected them.
If a journal ishas been corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciatereview the changes.
If a journal has been corrected by someone, I would carefully review the changes.
Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copyrewriting the corrected passages is very beneficial for my writing.
Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think rewriting the corrected passages is very beneficial.
In the end, I said thanks want to sincerely tohank the person who corrected mey journal.
I want to sincerely thank the person who corrected my journal.
In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it wouldmy spare time these days, I would write, because writing is silent and will not bother others.
In my spare time these days, I would write, because writing is silent and will not bother others.
Can you please explain what you mean by "not bothering others". Do you live roommates? I made some assumptions in my correction.
In fact, I also want to practice my listening skills, but it wthe soulnd bother other people, because I am not staying alonof the speaker may bother other people.
I also want to practice my listening skills, but the sound of the speaker may bother other people.
It would be better if you can be specific who these people are? your co-workers? roommates? neighbors?
So, almost all the time, I could write in any case.Well, at least I can practice my writing.
Well, at least I can practice my writing.
Journal 11/25/20
I woke up a little past 4 this morning again.
There was nothing I could do at the time.
I usually open some language apps and spend time on them.
This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and sawthe journals I'd posted to see if anyone had corrected them.
This morning, I checked all of the journals I'd posted to see if anyone had corrected them.
Iif a journal ishad been corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changego through the edits.
if a journal had been corrected by someone, I would carefully go through the edits.
What did you mean by appreciate here?
Most of the time, I willould copy ithe corrected passages again, because I think copying the correct passages isbelieve that to be very beneficial for my writing.
Most of the time, I would copy the corrected passages again because I believe that to be very beneficial for my writing.
In the end, I said thanks sincerely tohank the person who corrected me.
In the end, I sincerely thank the person who corrected me.
In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write,These days, in my free time, I write a lot because it would nodoesn't bother others.
These days, in my free time, I write a lot because it doesn't bother others.
In factActually, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people,s because I am not staying alone.
Actually, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother others because I am not staying alone.
So, almost all the time, I could write in any casways, I just write.
So, almost always, I just write.
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This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw if anyone corrected them.
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If a journal is corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changes.
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Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copying the correct passages is very beneficial for my writing.
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In the end, I said thanks sincerely to the person who corrected me.
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In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it would not bother others.
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In fact, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people, because I am not staying alone.
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