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My family comes to a hotel which I visited three years ago.

This hotel has a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked to visit here.

Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any where for 3 years.

However, our government changes the rule of the social distance, now there is no big huddles for traveling.

We are enjoying beautiful scenes and tasty food.

I hope my kids have a nice memory this weekend.

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We are enjoying beautiful scenes and tasty food.

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My family comes to a hotel which I visited three years ago.


My family comesvisited to a hotel which I visited three years ago. My family visited to a hotel which I visited three years ago.

My family comes tovisited a hotel which I visitedwent to three years ago. My family visited a hotel which I went to three years ago.

Changing "I visited" to "I went to" makes it sounds more natural as it is not repeated

This hotel has a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked to visit here.


This hotel hasd a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked to visit going there. This hotel had a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked going there.

Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any where for 3 years.


Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any where for 3 years. Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel anywhere for 3 years.

However, our government changes the rule of the social distance, now there is no big huddles for traveling.


However, our government changes the rule of thes changed social distance, n rules. Now thwere is no big huddles forare not allowed to go travelling in big groups. However, our government has changed social distance rules. Now were are not allowed to go travelling in big groups.

Do you mean that you are not allowed to go on holiday in big groups?

We are enjoying beautiful scenes and tasty food.


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I hope my kids have a nice memory this weekend.


I hope my kids have a nice memoryies this weekend. I hope my kids have nice memories this weekend.

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