May 5, 2023
Résume to the Chosen seri
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I want now to speak about the chosen. It's story about Jesus and his apostle. At this episode Jesus is coming but just someone know him. It's cool because we can understand the context of this story. Sometime we can to read the gospel like a book but people say that he was god but also a man. He have friend and they apostle have joice and problem. I thing about peter. It's first pope but both a people that he give information against his jews brother. His wife cry because she dont recognize her husband : he play game, he dont make shabbat. He said : "who is your faith ?"
It's cool because sometime when we read the gospel we dont remember all of that he dont write. It's not importante but to understand well we need open us eyes of the story of this guy.
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I want now to speak about the chosen (noun needed).
I'm not sure about the topic, but you need a noun after chosen. Unless this is a title of a book, then you'd capitalise it.
It's a story about Jesus and his apostles.
AtIn this episode Jesus is coming, but just someone knowalready knows of him.
It's cool, because we can understand the context ofit gives us more context to understand thise story.
Sometimes we can to read the gospel like a book, but people say that he was not only a god, but also a man.
He haves friends and they apostles have joiceys and problems.
I'm not sure if you meant "joys" here.
I thingk about pPeter.
It's first pope, but both a people that he give information against were his jewsish brothers.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean here.
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It's an app that we can add to yYoutTube.
I can keep track of unknown words and study them with qQuizlet.
Now, I want now to speak about the chosen.
If "the chosen" is a proper noun, like the name of a book or video, you need to capitalize the title.
It's a story about Jesus and his apostles.
AtIn this episode Jesus is coming, but just someone persone knows him.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. If there are 0 people who know Jesus, you can say "but nobody knows him." If there is one person who knows Jesus, use my correction above.
It's cool because we can understand the context of this story.
Sometimes, we can to read the gGospel like a book but p. People say that he was gGod but also a man.
Since the two halves of your sentence don't relate to each other, you need to separate them with a period, or use a conjunction that will explain the connection.
He haves friends, and theyse apostles have joiceys and problems.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
I thingk about pPeter.
It'sHe was the first pope, but both a people that hehe also giave information against his jJewsish brothers.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
If you're saying Peter was against the Jewish people in general, rather than one specific person, use "brothers" or "brethren." If you use "brother" (singular) it indicates you're talking about a specific person.
His wife cryied because she donidn't recognize her husband : he played games, he donidn't make shabbat.
You might want to say "observe Shabbat" instead, but I'm not Jewish so I am not positive on the preferred wording.
He said :, "wWho is your faith ?"
Do you mean "Where is your faith?"
It's cool because sometimes when we read the gGospel, we don't remember all of that he donidn't write.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
It's not importante, but to understand well, we need open usour eyes of the story of this guy.
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I want now to speak about the chosen. Now, I want If "the chosen" is a proper noun, like the name of a book or video, you need to capitalize the title. I want now to speak about the chosen (noun needed). I'm not sure about the topic, but you need a noun after chosen. Unless this is a title of a book, then you'd capitalise it. |
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It's story about Jesus and his apostle. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. |
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At this episode Jesus is coming but just someone know him.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. If there are 0 people who know Jesus, you can say "but nobody knows him." If there is one person who knows Jesus, use my correction above.
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It's first pope but both a people that he give information against his jews brother.
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