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bicalho

Feb. 4, 2026

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My first text

Whatsup, guys! My name is Lucas.

Today im telling yall my first lecture about my day.
Well, in the mornning i receive a complex task to solve in my job. Im a software engennering and my boss tell me to start the rebuild of a very old project. I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code. furthermore, i had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.
After my work i went to the gym and made my leg day, doing 10 exercises, play some video-game and write that letter.

Thank yall for reading!!

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Whats’s up, guys!

Today iI’m telling yall my first lecturetter about my day.

Well, in the mornning iI received a complex task to solve in my job.

Im a software engenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild of a very old project.

I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code.

fFurthermore, iI had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.

After my work i, I went to the gym and madedid my leg day, doing 10 exercises,. Then, I played some video- game and. Lastly, I wriote thatis letter.

Thank yall for reading!!

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bicalho

Feb. 5, 2026

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Thanks brother!!

Today imI will be telling yall my first lecture about my day.

Well, in the mornning i. I received a complex task to solve inwork on at my job.

Im a sSoftware eEngenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild of a very old project.

I had to refactor all the old code written in phpPHP, translating ithis into a JavaScript code.

fFurthermore, iI had to reorder ithis into new function, improving the application.

After my work i, I went to the gym and made myfor leg day, doing 10 exercises,. I then played some video- games and wriote that letteris post.

Thank yall for reading!!

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Welcome and great first post!
Generally, you should aim to start your sentences with capital letter, write “I” in capital letters and punctuate properly. Keep going!

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bicalho

Feb. 5, 2026

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Thanks for the feedback, brother!!

My first text

Or My First Text

Whats's up, guys!

What's up is an informal word that is used between close friends. Preferably use Hello or Hi

My name is Lucas.

Today iI'm telling y'all about my first lecture aboutnd my day.

Well, iIn the mornning iI receive a complex task to solve in my job.

I'm a software engenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild ofing a very old project.

Since it happened in the past "told" is used.
I used rebuilding because it's an ongoing project.

I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating thisPHP, and translate it into a JavaScript code.

I'm don't know much about developers terms.

fFurthermore, iI had to reorder this into new function, improvingn order to improve function of the application.

After my work i, I went to the gym and made my leg day, doing, did 10 exercises, played some video- games and wriote thatis letters.

I didn't understand the leg day part, so I deleted it.

When something happens in the past, you're to use past tense.

Video game is separate, and not a combined word.

Thank y'all for reading!!

It's y'all, a short form of you all.

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Keep it up 💪🏾. You should work on your tenses and know when to use capital letters.

I've never heard of a female named Lucas.

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bicalho

Feb. 5, 2026

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Thanks for the feedback!!
Thats name is common for woman in my country hahaha

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Toluwani

Feb. 5, 2026

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You're welcome :)

Wow.

My first text


My first text

Or My First Text

Whatsup, guys!


Whats's up, guys!

What's up is an informal word that is used between close friends. Preferably use Hello or Hi

Whats’s up, guys!

My name is Lucas.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today im telling yall my first lecture about my day.


Today iI'm telling y'all about my first lecture aboutnd my day.

Today imI will be telling yall my first lecture about my day.

Today iI’m telling yall my first lecturetter about my day.

Well, in the mornning i receive a complex task to solve in my job.


Well, iIn the mornning iI receive a complex task to solve in my job.

Well, in the mornning i. I received a complex task to solve inwork on at my job.

Well, in the mornning iI received a complex task to solve in my job.

Im a software engennering and my boss tell me to start the rebuild of a very old project.


I'm a software engenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild ofing a very old project.

Since it happened in the past "told" is used. I used rebuilding because it's an ongoing project.

Im a sSoftware eEngenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild of a very old project.

Im a software engenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild of a very old project.

I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code.


I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating thisPHP, and translate it into a JavaScript code.

I'm don't know much about developers terms.

I had to refactor all the old code written in phpPHP, translating ithis into a JavaScript code.

I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code.

furthermore, i had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.


fFurthermore, iI had to reorder this into new function, improvingn order to improve function of the application.

fFurthermore, iI had to reorder ithis into new function, improving the application.

fFurthermore, iI had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.

After my work i went to the gym and made my leg day, doing 10 exercises, play some video-game and write that letter.


After my work i, I went to the gym and made my leg day, doing, did 10 exercises, played some video- games and wriote thatis letters.

I didn't understand the leg day part, so I deleted it. When something happens in the past, you're to use past tense. Video game is separate, and not a combined word.

After my work i, I went to the gym and made myfor leg day, doing 10 exercises,. I then played some video- games and wriote that letteris post.

After my work i, I went to the gym and madedid my leg day, doing 10 exercises,. Then, I played some video- game and. Lastly, I wriote thatis letter.

Thank yall for reading!!


Thank y'all for reading!!

It's y'all, a short form of you all.

Thank yall for reading!!

Thank yall for reading!!

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