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Whatsup, guys! My name is Lucas.
Today im telling yall my first lecture about my day.
Well, in the mornning i receive a complex task to solve in my job. Im a software engennering and my boss tell me to start the rebuild of a very old project. I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code. furthermore, i had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.
After my work i went to the gym and made my leg day, doing 10 exercises, play some video-game and write that letter.
Thank yall for reading!!
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Welcome and great first post!
Generally, you should aim to start your sentences with capital letter, write “I” in capital letters and punctuate properly. Keep going!
My first text
Or My First Text
Whats's up, guys!
What's up is an informal word that is used between close friends. Preferably use Hello or Hi
My name is Lucas.
Today iI'm telling y'all about my first lecture aboutnd my day.
Well, iIn the mornning iI receive a complex task to solve in my job.
I'm a software engenneringineer and my boss tellold me to start the rebuild ofing a very old project.
Since it happened in the past "told" is used.
I used rebuilding because it's an ongoing project.
I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating thisPHP, and translate it into a JavaScript code.
I'm don't know much about developers terms.
fFurthermore, iI had to reorder this into new function, improvingn order to improve function of the application.
After my work i, I went to the gym and made my leg day, doing, did 10 exercises, played some video- games and wriote thatis letters.
I didn't understand the leg day part, so I deleted it.
When something happens in the past, you're to use past tense.
Video game is separate, and not a combined word.
Thank y'all for reading!!
It's y'all, a short form of you all.
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Keep it up 💪🏾. You should work on your tenses and know when to use capital letters.
I've never heard of a female named Lucas.
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Whatsup, guys! What What's up is an informal word that is used between close friends. Preferably use Hello or Hi |
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Im a software engennering and my boss tell me to start the rebuild of a very old project. I'm a software eng Since it happened in the past "told" is used. I used rebuilding because it's an ongoing project. I’m a |
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I had to refactor all the old code written in php, translating this into a JavaScript code. I had to refactor all the old code written in I'm don't know much about developers terms. I had to refactor all the old code written in |
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furthermore, i had to reorder this into new function, improving the application.
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After my work i went to the gym and made my leg day, doing 10 exercises, play some video-game and write that letter. After my work I didn't understand the leg day part, so I deleted it. When something happens in the past, you're to use past tense. Video game is separate, and not a combined word. After |
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