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heatedcanine

March 25, 2024

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Running in the Rain

Hi,
This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.
How are you doing?

It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, my day off yesterday, so I was lazy waking up late.
However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started running in the rain.
It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable. I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit. Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance"). But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance). The average pace was 11:52/km. It was a slower pace than walking. Lol

Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.
Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average. The raincoat worked!
I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.


雨天のランニング

やあ、ホットドッグです。
いかがお過ごしですか。

昨日は日曜日で休日でしたが雨降りで陰鬱でしたので、レイジーで朝寝ぼうした。
けれども、朝のコーヒーをのんだら、レイジーからクレイジーになって、雨の中でランニングを始めた。
雨の中を走るのはとても難しかった。というのは、水たまりを踏まないようにしなければならないし(でも結局靴は完全にずぶぬれになってしまった)、100均で買った安物のレインコートが耳にうるさくてとても不快だったから。
5.26キロを1時間2分26秒で走って止めてしまった。昨日は平地をSLDとして走ることを予定していたのだが、VSSD(とても短い距離を無茶苦茶遅いスピードで走る)になってしまった。なにせ平均速度がキロ11分52秒で、歩くよりも遅かった。

1週間前に参加したトライルラン大会の参加賞でスポーツデポの500円割引クーポンをもらっていたので、午後にスポーツデポに行って1999円のランナー用のレインコートを買った。
そして夕方にもう一度6.07キロ走ったが、今度は、50分36秒、平均速度はキロ当たり8分21秒だった。レインコートは快適だった。

夜にはコインランドリーに行って、靴を洗って乾かした。

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Running in the Rain

Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.

How are you doing?

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started running in the rain.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable.

I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

It was a slower pace than walking.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average.

I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.

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heatedcanine

April 4, 2024

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How are you doing?

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

The raincoat worked!

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heatedcanine

March 28, 2024

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Running in the Rain

Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.

How are you doing?

I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

The average pace was 11:52/km.

It was a slower pace than walking.

The raincoat worked!

I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.

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heatedcanine

March 26, 2024

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Running in the Rain

Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.

How are you doing?

I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

The average pace was 11:52/km.

It was a slower pace than walking.

The raincoat worked!

I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.

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heatedcanine

March 26, 2024

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Running in the Rain

Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.

How are you doing?

I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

It was a slower pace than walking.

The raincoat worked!

I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.

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heatedcanine

March 25, 2024

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Running in the Rain

Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.

How are you doing?

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started running in the rain.

I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.

Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

The average pace was 11:52/km.

It was a slower pace than walking.

Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average.

The raincoat worked!

I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.

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heatedcanine

March 25, 2024

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Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

The raincoat worked!

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Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").

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March 25, 2024

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I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.


I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and then quit. I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and then quit.

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I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 and quit.hours and before quitting I ran 5.26 kilometers in 1:02:26 hours and before quitting

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Yesterday I chose a flat course and aimed to run SLD (not the illegal drug but "Slow Long Distance").


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Running in the Rain


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Hi, This is Hot Dog, speaking on LangCorrect.


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How are you doing?


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It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, my day off yesterday, so I was lazy waking up late.


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ItYesterday was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, which was my day off yesterday, so I was lazy wakingand woke up late. Yesterday was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, which was my day off, so I was lazy and woke up late.

It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, so my day off yesterday, so. Thus, I was lazy waking up late. It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, so my day off yesterday. Thus, I was lazy waking up late.

It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, it was my day off yesterday, so I was lazy waking up late. It was a gloomy and rainy Sunday, it was my day off yesterday, so I was lazy waking up late.

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started running in the rain.


However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain.

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain.

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However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain.

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started a running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and started a run in the rain.

"Started running" isn't incorrect, but it kinda sounds like you had your coffee and immediately ran outside without changing clothes or anything. ^^;

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain.

However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain. However, after drinking a cup of coffee, my mind changed from lazy to crazy (or from depressed to manic), and I started running in the rain.

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It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable.


It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coincheap raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable. It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the cheap raincoat was very noisy and uncomfortable.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coincheap raincoat was veryso noisy to in my ears and, to the point of being quite uncomfortable. It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the cheap raincoat was so noisy in my ears, to the point of being quite uncomfortable.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coindollar store raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable. It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the dollar store raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable.

I think everyone could probably understand the meaning of "one coin" but that expression doesn't really exist in English, so this is something similar.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coinmy cheap raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable. It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned out in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and my cheap raincoat was very noisy and uncomfortable.

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I've never heard the expression one-coin before. I like it, but just in case, you can just say "cheap" of course.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but it turned outthat was in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable. It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but that was in vain, making my shoes completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my ears and uncomfortable.

It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (but itwhich turned out to be in vain, makingas my shoes got completely wet), and the one-coin raincoat was very noisy to my earssoaked either way). The one-coin raincoat I wore made a lot of noise and was uncomfortable. to wear It was very hard to run in the rain because I had to avoid stepping on puddles (which turned out to be in vain, as my shoes got completely soaked either way). The one-coin raincoat I wore made a lot of noise and was uncomfortable to wear

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Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average.


Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21 min/km on average. Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21 min/km on average.

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Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21 min/km on average. Then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21 min/km on average.

Then I ran again in the evening, another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average. Then I ran again in the evening, another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average.

Then I ran again in the evening, I ran again for another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average. Then in the evening, I ran again for another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36, which was 8:21/km on average.

TI then I ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21/km on average. I then ran again in the evening another 6.07 kilometers in 50:36 minutes, which was 8:21/km on average.

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The raincoat worked!


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I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes at night.


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I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes atduring the night. I went to a coin laundry to wash and dry my shoes during the night.

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But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).


But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance). But it turned out to be VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

Very funny joke, Hot Dog-san!

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But it turned out to be a VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance). But it turned out to be a VSSD (Very Slow Short Distance).

The average pace was 11:52/km.


TheMy average pace was 11:52/km. My average pace was 11:52/km.

The average pace was 11:52 min/km. The average pace was 11:52 min/km.

you always forget the time units: hours, min(utes) :-)

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TheMy average pace was 11:52min/km. My average pace was 11:52min/km.

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The average pace was 11:52 min/km. The average pace was 11:52 min/km.

TheMy average pace was 11:52/km. My average pace was 11:52/km.

It was a slower pace than walking.


It was aThe pace was actually slower pace than walking. The pace was actually slower than walking.

It was aThis pace was slower pace than walking. This pace was slower than walking.

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It was an even slower pace than my average walking speed. It was an even slower pace than my average walking speed.

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Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.


Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to thea sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to a sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depot as a prize for participation at the trail run raceevent one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to thea sports shop in the afternoon and purchased/bought a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depot as a prize for participation at the trail run event one week ago, I went to a sports shop in the afternoon and purchased/bought a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation a week ago, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race as a prize for participation a week ago, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to thea sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to a sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race onea week ago, as a prize for participation, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo at the trail run race a week ago as a prize for participation, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo(?) at the trail run race one week ago, as a prize for participationg, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners. Lol Since I got a 500 yen discount coupon for Sports Depo(?) at the trail run race one week ago as a prize for participating, I went to the sports shop in the afternoon and purchased a 1,999 yen raincoat for runners.

I couldn't understand what "Depo" meant here.

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