mMy dDay My Day

In English, we usually capitalize the first letter of every important word in a title.

tToday my day started as usual. Today my day started as usual

Begin your sentences with capital letters. Also, this sentence and your next one can be combined to form one sentence.

tToday, my day started as usual. Today, my day started as usual.

except for the fact i’vethat I slept a little bit longer than usual. except for the fact that I slept a bit longer than usual.

Capitalize "I" when used as a pronoun. Typically English speakers will say "except for the fact that _____." Also, using "little bit" isn't technically incorrect and is used in spoken English quite often, but it's redundant so choose to use either "little" or "bit" when writing.

except for the fact ithat I’ve slept a little bit longer than usual. except for the fact that I’ve slept a little bit longer than usual.

This is an incomplete sentence. This should be attached to the sentence before it. Today, my day started as usual, except for the fact that I’ve slept a little bit longer than usual.

aA few days ago iI had my bangs cut, so yesterday before bed iI tried to style them with curlers and sleep with ithem. A few days ago I had my bangs cut, so yesterday before bed I tried to style them with curlers and sleep with them.

Capitalization. Also "curlers" (plural) is typically used regardless of how many you're actually using.

aA few days ago iI had my bangs cut, so yesterday before bed iI tried to style them with a curler and sleep with it. A few days ago I had my bangs cut, so yesterday before bed I tried to style them with a curler and sleep with it.

The first word in a sentence and the pronoun "I" are always capitalized in English.

tThat’s one of the reasons why iI’ve been sleeping longer -— because oI felt uncomfortable with that thing. That’s one of the reasons why I’ve been sleeping longer — because I felt uncomfortable with that thing.

Capitalization. Also use an em dash instead of a single hyphen.

tThat’s one of the reasons why iI’ve been sleeping longer -: because oI felt uncomfortable with that thing. That’s one of the reasons why I’ve been sleeping longer: because I felt uncomfortable with that thing.

Em dashes "--", which programs correct into an extra long dash, are pretty rare in modern English, colons ":" and semi-colons ";" are also rare but more comfortable here.

bBut it was worth it -— when iI woke up, my bangs were styled perfectly. But it was worth it — when I woke up, my bangs were styled perfectly.

Capitalization, em dash.

bBut it was worth it - w. When iI woke up, my bangs were styled perfectly. But it was worth it. When I woke up, my bangs were styled perfectly.

You could connect this with a colon as well, but it feels less natural than just breaking it into 2 sentences because you used a colon in the sentence before. 2 sentences in a row using a colon doesn't sound as natural as 3 sentences with varying lengths.

iI liked it. I liked it.

iI liked it. I liked it.

but still aAt home At home

Combine your next two sentences

but still at home but still at home

Not sure why langcorrect pulled this fragment out separately for correction, this isn't a complete sentence and should be attached below.

I tied my hair back because I did my housewas doing my chores and my hair was interfbothering me. I tied my hair back because I was doing my chores and my hair was bothering me.

Typically we say "tied my hair back." "Chores" implies that they're done at home so you don't have to include "house" but if you did you would write it as "household chores." Lastly, you would use "bothering" instead of "interfering" in this situation unless your hair was directly stopping you from doing something instead of just irritating you.

I tied my hair because I did my house chores and my hair was interfering me. I tied my hair because I did my house chores and my hair was interfering me.

Full sentence correction: But, while I was still at home, I tied my hair back because I did my house chores and my hair was interfering with my work. You could also use "interfering with me," but "my work," referring to you working on your chores, felt closer to the intent of the sentence.

nNow iI’m sitting in car with my personal driver waiting for my brother to finish school day and come home, but while driving. On the way home they will drop me off near my rehabilitation placecenter (iI’m visiting it because iI had a surgery). Now I’m sitting in car with my personal driver waiting for my brother to finish school and come home. On the way home they will drop me off near my rehabilitation center (I’m visiting it because I had a surgery).

Capitalization. It also sounds more natural to separate your sentences here. "On the way home" is typically how we would refer to something happening while driving back home (e.g., "I hit a deer on the way home" sounds more natural than "while driving home I hit a deer.") Also, places like this are typically called "centers" or "clinics."

nNow i, I’m sitting in the car with my personal driver and waiting for my brother to finish the school day and come home, but w. While driving home, they will drop me off near my rehabilitation place (iI’m visiting it because iI had a surgery). Now, I’m sitting in the car with my personal driver and waiting for my brother to finish the school day and come home. While driving home, they will drop me off near my rehabilitation place (I’m visiting it because I had surgery).

Run-on sentence. The most common solution to a run-on sentence is to break it into 2 or more sentences. Correct use of parentheses "(" and ")." Modern English doesn't use them as much, so it's also common to just arrange the sentence so that the parentheses are not necessary. Both methods are correct. While driving home, they will drop me off near my rehabilitation place, which I'm visiting because I've had surgery.

and aAfter that iI will have a ride togo to the gas station because my car is running out of fuel. After that I will go to the gas station because my car is running out of fuel.

You typically wouldn't start a sentence with "and." Use "go to" for traveling to a location (e.g., "I will go to the store tomorrow" sounds more natural than "I will ride to the store tomorrow."

and aAfter that i, I will have ato ride to the gas station because my car is running out of fuel. After that, I will have to ride to the gas station because my car is running out of fuel.

and for today iI think that’s will be it for today. I think that will be it for today.

and for today iI think that’s will be it for today. I think that will be it for today.