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Vinson

Jan. 31, 2026

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Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all the time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime. Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt. We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits. Maybe we were just too excited about the activities. The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler. Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously. The skin was red and dark. Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂
I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin. Whish we could recover quickly.

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Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe we were just too excited about the activities.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously.

The skin was red and dark.

Watching / Looking at me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,.😂

“Watching” implies that she watched you do something. I think “looking at” is more natural here. Or you could say, “My daughter laughed loudly at me and said I looked like a panda.”

I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin.

Whish we couldI hope we recover quickly.

In this context, “wish” implies that you believe you will not recover quickly.

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The sun is stronger in Sanya because it’s closer to the equator, so it’s easier to get burnt there. I hope you recover quickly. In the meantime, perhaps you could rent wetsuits and wear them to protect your skin from the sun’s rays. I’ve done this in the past, and it worked well for me.

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Vinson

Feb. 1, 2026

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Yep, Sanya is closer to the equator and the sunshine is really intense here. I really appreciate your corrections and suggestions ^-^

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JoeTofu

Feb. 1, 2026

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👍

My family and I spent nearly all theof our time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe w We were just too excited about the activities. to notice.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more palernot burnt.

Unfortunately, I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriousbadly.

The skin around the glasses was red and dark.

Watchinghen she saw me, my daughter laughed loudly and said that I looked like a panda,😂

I bought skin repair stuffcreams and we put it on our burnt skin.

Whish we couldI hope that we recover quickly.

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Vinson

Feb. 1, 2026

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Thanks so much

Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all ththe whole time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe we were just too excited about the activities.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously burnt.

The skin was red and dark.

Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂

I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin.

Whish we could recover quickly.

This can be correct, but it depends what you want to say.

Wish we could recover quickly = You wish it were possible to recover quickly, but it's not.

Hope we (can) recover quickly = You think it's possible that you will recover quickly.

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Great work! I also got sunburned a week or two ago. I hope your sunburns aren't too painful!

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Vinson

Feb. 1, 2026

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Thanks for your corrections and all the best.

I Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Whish we could recover quickly.

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Vinson

Feb. 1, 2026

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Thanks

Got Burnt


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My family and I spent nearly all the time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.


My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

My family and I spent nearly all ththe whole time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

My family and I spent nearly all theof our time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.


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We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

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Maybe we were just too excited about the activities.


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Whish we could recover quickly.


Whish we could recover quickly.

Whish we could recover quickly.

This can be correct, but it depends what you want to say. Wish we could recover quickly = You wish it were possible to recover quickly, but it's not. Hope we (can) recover quickly = You think it's possible that you will recover quickly.

Whish we couldI hope that we recover quickly.

Whish we couldI hope we recover quickly.

In this context, “wish” implies that you believe you will not recover quickly.

Although we had put on sunscream, we got burnt.


The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.


The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more palernot burnt.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously.


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The skin was red and dark.


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Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂


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Watchinghen she saw me, my daughter laughed loudly and said that I looked like a panda,😂

Watching / Looking at me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,.😂

“Watching” implies that she watched you do something. I think “looking at” is more natural here. Or you could say, “My daughter laughed loudly at me and said I looked like a panda.”

I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin.


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I bought skin repair stuffcreams and we put it on our burnt skin.

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Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt.


Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

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