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Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all the time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime. Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt. We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits. Maybe we were just too excited about the activities. The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler. Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously. The skin was red and dark. Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂
I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin. Whish we could recover quickly.

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My family and I spent nearly all theof our time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe w We were just too excited about the activities. to notice.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more palernot burnt.

Unfortunately, I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriousbadly.

The skin around the glasses was red and dark.

Watchinghen she saw me, my daughter laughed loudly and said that I looked like a panda,😂

I bought skin repair stuffcreams and we put it on our burnt skin.

Whish we couldI hope that we recover quickly.

Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all ththe whole time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe we were just too excited about the activities.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously burnt.

The skin was red and dark.

Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂

I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin.

Whish we could recover quickly.

This can be correct, but it depends what you want to say.

Wish we could recover quickly = You wish it were possible to recover quickly, but it's not.

Hope we (can) recover quickly = You think it's possible that you will recover quickly.

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Great work! I also got sunburned a week or two ago. I hope your sunburns aren't too painful!

I Got Burnt

My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

Whish we could recover quickly.

Got Burnt


I Got Burnt

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My family and I spent nearly all the time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.


My family and I spent nearly all the time inday swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

My family and I spent nearly all ththe whole time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

My family and I spent nearly all theof our time in swimming in the sea and taking photos on the beach during the daytime.

We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.


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We didn't notice it until we went back to the hotel room and took off our swimsuits.

Maybe we were just too excited about the activities.


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Maybe w We were just too excited about the activities. to notice.

Whish we could recover quickly.


Whish we could recover quickly.

Whish we could recover quickly.

This can be correct, but it depends what you want to say. Wish we could recover quickly = You wish it were possible to recover quickly, but it's not. Hope we (can) recover quickly = You think it's possible that you will recover quickly.

Whish we couldI hope that we recover quickly.

Although we had put on sunscream, we got burnt.


The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.


The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more paler.

The spots covered by the swimsuits were obviously more palernot burnt.

Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously.


Unfortunately I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriously burnt.

Unfortunately, I forgot to take off my glasses when putting on sunscreen, so the spots around my eyes were burnt seriousbadly.

The skin was red and dark.


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The skin around the glasses was red and dark.

Watching me, my daughter laughed loudly and said I looked like a panda,😂


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Watchinghen she saw me, my daughter laughed loudly and said that I looked like a panda,😂

I bought skin repair stuff and we put it on our burnt skin.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought skin repair stuffcreams and we put it on our burnt skin.

Although we had put on sunscreen, we got burnt.


Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although we had put on sunscreen, we still got burnt.

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