yesterday
A piece of my mind - the reason
Time flies.
I still remember that day when I chat with my classmate back in hometown about our expectations and imagination for future life. It was a rainy day - not a ideal weather for dreaming about a bright future , but we were excited about what kind of person we would met in the future once we passed all exams and could relocate to any big cities. Back at that time, I didn't realise that's a privilege of dreaming possibilities without thinking about the heavy reality. Now, I'm experiencing a middle-age crisis, and worried about endless bills and a failing marriage.
We have a lot of arrangements , and one of the topic is my poor English. My partner believes my limited vocabulary and horrible grammar made our life harder - because we can't communicate properly. It's so ironic - when we first met, I can't even speak English and we can still have hours of chats. But now, our house is like a silent tomb with our dead marriage inside.
I want to write down all of my thoughts and record my whole experience - seperated now and might be divorce soon. Nowadays people like to use AI tools to polish their words but I cherish the idea of sharing thoughts with others and let people to correct my grammar mistakes rather than ChatGPT.
A piece of my mind - the reason
Time flies.
I still remember thate day when I chatted with my classmate back in my hometown about our expectations and what we imaginationed for our future lifeves.
It was a rainy day - not a ideal weather for dreaming about a bright future , but we were excited about what kind of person we would meet in the future once we passed all our exams and could relocate to any big cities.
Back at thate time, I didn't realise that it's a privilege of dreamingto be able to dream about the possibilities without thinking about the heavy (/harsh) reality.
Now, I'm experiencing a middle-age crisis, and worried about endless bills and a failing marriage.
We have a lot of arrangeguments , and one of the topics is my poor English.
My partner believes my limited vocabulary and horrible grammar has made our life harder - because we can't communicate properly.
It's so ironic - when we first met, I caouldn't even speak English and we canwould still chave hours of chatt for hours.
But now, our house is like a silent tomb with our dead marriage inside.
I want to write down all of my thoughts and record my whole experience - we've sepearated now and might be divorced soon.
Nowadays, people like to use AI tools to polish their words, but I cherish the idea of sharing thoughts with others and letting people to correct my grammar mistakes rather than ChatGPT.
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I still remember that day when I chat with my classmate back in hometown about our expectations and imagination for future life. I still remember th |
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It was a rainy day - not a ideal weather for dreaming about a bright future , but we were excited about what kind of person we would met in the future once we passed all exams and could relocate to any big cities. It was a rainy day - not |
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Back at that time, I didn't realise that's a privilege of dreaming possibilities without thinking about the heavy reality. Back at th |
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Now, I'm experiencing a middle-age crisis, and worried about endless bills and a failing marriage. Now, I'm experiencing a middle-age crisis, and worried about endless bills and a failing marriage. |
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We have a lot of arrangements , and one of the topic is my poor English. We have a lot of ar |
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My partner believes my limited vocabulary and horrible grammar made our life harder - because we can't communicate properly. My partner believes my limited vocabulary and horrible grammar has made our life harder - because we can't communicate properly. |
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It's so ironic - when we first met, I can't even speak English and we can still have hours of chats. It's so ironic - when we first met, I c |
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But now, our house is like a silent tomb with our dead marriage inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to write down all of my thoughts and record my whole experience - seperated now and might be divorce soon. I want to write down all of my thoughts and record my whole experience - we've sep |
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Nowadays people like to use AI tools to polish their words but I cherish the idea of sharing thoughts with others and let people to correct my grammar mistakes rather than ChatGPT. Nowadays, people like to use AI tools to polish their words, but I cherish the idea of sharing thoughts with others and letting people |
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