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serhan

April 12, 2023

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Quotation

Mr John is asking a quotation related third part inspection for the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be used Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project. Information related the project is in the attached file. I am required to submit the quotation with respect to the project by April 20th , 2023.

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Quotation

Mr. John is asking for a quotation related to the third -party inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of the USA, which will be used Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

Information related the project is in the attached file.

I am required to submit the quotation with respect to the project by April 20th , 2023.

Quotation

Mr. John is asking for a quotation relatede about third part inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be used in Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

People very rarely say Mr./Mrs./etc. + first name. You almost always use their last name (the exception being if the person told you it's okay to refer to them by their first name, but by that point, you are casual with that person. Another exception is if you cannot find the person's last name for whatever reason).

I think you meant quote, not quotation.

Information related to the project is in the attached file.

I am requirSince, I need to submit the quotation with respecte to the project by April 20th , 2023.

"Need" works better in this context

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serhan

April 12, 2023

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Mr. John is asking for a quotation relatede about third part inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be used in Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

Some dictionaries refer "quotation". I will use "quote" in the next context :) Thank you

Quotation

Mr. John is asking for a quotation related to the third part inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be useduse the Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

I think this is what you mean.

Information related the project is in the attached file.

I am required to submit the quotation with respect to the project by April 20th , 2023.

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Great job!

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serhan

April 12, 2023

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Thank you :)

Quotation


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Mr John is asking a quotation related third part inspection for the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be used Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.


Mr. John is asking for a quotation related to the third part inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be useduse the Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

I think this is what you mean.

Mr. John is asking for a quotation relatede about third part inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of USA, which will be used in Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

People very rarely say Mr./Mrs./etc. + first name. You almost always use their last name (the exception being if the person told you it's okay to refer to them by their first name, but by that point, you are casual with that person. Another exception is if you cannot find the person's last name for whatever reason). I think you meant quote, not quotation.

Mr. John is asking for a quotation related to the third -party inspection ofor the pipes that will be supplied outside of the USA, which will be used Lake Salt Underground Natural Gas Storage Project.

Information related the project is in the attached file.


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Information related to the project is in the attached file.

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I am required to submit the quotation with respect to the project by April 20th , 2023.


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I am requirSince, I need to submit the quotation with respecte to the project by April 20th , 2023.

"Need" works better in this context

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