Feb. 5, 2022
Quit My Job (2)
I kept in my mind that I have to leave my parents' house by the time I turn 30. However, it was difficult to rent a room because I wasn't sure when I could find a new job and where next office is located. Another reason is expensive rent in Tokyo. Actually, half of my unmarried friends still live in their parents' house. I'd like to know how do you feel that men in their late 20s live with their parents. It seems that some women can't consider them as a partner. I can't deny that I'm poor at household chores.
My new job is full remote-work and pays for rent allowance so that I could start living by myself. Now that I literally feel at home while working.
I keept in my mind the fact that I have to leave my parents' house by the time I turn 30.
However, I have found that it was difficult to rent a room because I wasn't sure when I could find a new job and where the next office iwas located.
Another reason is that the rent is expensive rent in Tokyo.
I'd like to know how do you feel thaabout men in their late 20s who live with their parents.
I can't deny that I'm poorbad at household chores.
Now that I literally feel at home while working.
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Good job! I think that having to live with one's parents due to economic circumstances is a reality that most people do not pay much attention to.
Feb. 12, 2022
Thank you! I agree that some people are forced to live with their parents due to economic circumstances so that we shouldn't excessively focus on the matter.
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However, it was difficult to rent a room because I wasn't sure when I cwould find a new job and where the next office iswould be located.
Another reason is the expensive rent in Tokyo.
Actually, half of my unmarried friends still live in their parents' house.
I'd like to know how do you feel thaabout men in their late 20s who live with their parents.
My new job is fully remote-work and pays for rent allowance so that. So I could start living by myself.
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Great effort :)
(Since you asked, in India also we live with our parents for a long time. But I understand that some sort of distance is required after you're married or living with a partner. Maybe a mix of both would be best.)
Feb. 12, 2022
Thank you for your comments. I agree that some sort of distance is required even though we have to cherish our families and curb our spending.
Quit My Job (2)
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Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you!
Quit My Job (2)
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I'd like to know how do you feel thaabout men in their late 20s livestill living with their parents.
It seems that some women cawon't consider them as a partner.
I can't deny that I'm poor at household chores.
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Now that, I literally feel at home while working.
Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you for providing alternative sentences to sound more natural.
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