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alexwong2164

Oct. 9, 2021

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Quantity = Quality

I am really happy the amount of time that I put on training recently.

In 7 days get up at 6:30, jogging for one hour, play snooker for 2 hours.

But now I should and need to focus more on “quality” aspect.

Because if Quantity = Quality, I should become a very “sex man”!

Start from next training section, I will re-design the process to get a better outcome for me.

An effective management and a good balance of your own life.

That is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.

Don’t just use head to think, use hand to make things happen.

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I am really happy the amount of time that I put inton training recently.

In 7 days getFor the last 7 days, I have gotten up at 6:30, gone jogging for one hour, and played snooker for 2 hours.

Past tense is better to describe prior activities.

But now I should and need to focus more on the “quality” aspect.

just one of the words is ok

Because if Quantity = Quality, I should become a very “sexy man”!

An effective management and a good balance of your own life...

see below:

That... is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.

It sounds better to join this with the previous sentence. "An effective management and a good balance of your own life is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.

Don’t just use your head to think, use your hands to make things happen.

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Good piece. Good luck training!

Quantity = Quality


I am really happy the amount of time that I put on training recently.


I am really happy the amount of time that I put inton training recently.

In 7 days get up at 6:30, jogging for one hour, play snooker for 2 hours.


In 7 days getFor the last 7 days, I have gotten up at 6:30, gone jogging for one hour, and played snooker for 2 hours.

Past tense is better to describe prior activities.

But now I should and need to focus more on “quality” aspect.


But now I should and need to focus more on the “quality” aspect.

just one of the words is ok

Because if Quantity = Quality, I should become a very “sex man”!


Because if Quantity = Quality, I should become a very “sexy man”!

Start from next training section, I will re-design the process to get a better outcome for me.


An effective management and a good balance of your own life.


An effective management and a good balance of your own life...

see below:

That is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.


That... is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.

It sounds better to join this with the previous sentence. "An effective management and a good balance of your own life is a real and serious business to make yourself become a “good product”.

Don’t just use head to think, use hand to make things happen.


Don’t just use your head to think, use your hands to make things happen.

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