yesterday
A Serpent
While I was weeding, I discovered a green snake yesterday.
It quickly ran away.
In the Garden of Eden, the serpent was regarded as Satan.
Thank God for keeping me safe from Satan.
昨天在除草的时候，我发现了一条绿色的蛇。
它很快逃走了。
蛇在伊甸园里被认为是撒旦。
感谢上帝让我免受撒旦的伤害。
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A Serpent
While I was weeding, I discovered a green snake yesterday.
It quickly ranslithered away.
It quickly slithered away.
Snakes typically "slither" in English, as running implies legs.
Also, when snakes speak/make sound, they "hiss". When they put their body in a spiral shape, they "coil" and "uncoil". When they are raising their heads, they are "rearing back" (to strike). They can also "constrict" (squeeze) their prey, if they are a boa constrictor or similar species. And sometimes roads that are particularly winding/have a lot of turns are described as "snaking through" the countryside/mountains. There are lots of words just for snakes :)
In the Garden of Eden, the serpent was regarded as Satan.
Thank God for keeping me safe from Satan.
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Luckily the snake didn't bite you! Excellent writing as always :)
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It quickly ran away.
It quickly Snakes typically "slither" in English, as running implies legs. Also, when snakes speak/make sound, they "hiss". When they put their body in a spiral shape, they "coil" and "uncoil". When they are raising their heads, they are "rearing back" (to strike). They can also "constrict" (squeeze) their prey, if they are a boa constrictor or similar species. And sometimes roads that are particularly winding/have a lot of turns are described as "snaking through" the countryside/mountains. There are lots of words just for snakes :) |
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Thank God for keeping me safe from Satan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It quickly runned away. |
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