Feb. 16, 2023
There are four species of hyenas. Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, that is the largest member of the family, with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80 Kg. Neck and forequarters are very developed whereas hindquarters are not that strong. That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the forequarters being taller than the rear ones.
The power of their jaw is legendary. In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites of the animal world, in average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance. This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and eve waste of other animals. They don’t miss any opportunity of becoming a meal!
A couple of more maybe astonishing facts. Females are considerably larger than males. Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules. Males don’t participate in the care of the offspring. Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite, what is not the case. Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, what says a lot about hyenas’ intelligence.
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There are four species of hyenas.
Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, thatwhich is the largest member of the family, with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80 Kkg.
Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, which is the largest member of the family with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80kg.
NIts neck and forequarterlegs are very developed whereas its hindquarters are not that strong.
Its neck and forelegs are very developed whereas its hindquarters are not that strong.
That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the forequarterlegs being taller than the rear ones.
That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the forelegs being taller than the rear ones.
The power of their jaw iss are legendary.
The power of their jaws are legendary.
In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites ofin the animal world, ian average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance.
In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites in the animal world, an average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance.
This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and even on the waste of other animals. This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and even on the waste of other animals.
They don’t miss any opportunity of becomfor eating a meal!
They don’t miss any opportunity for eating a meal!
A couple of more maybepossibly astonishing facts are the following.
A couple of more possibly astonishing facts are the following.
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Females are considerably larger than males.
Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules.
Hyena society is regulated by matriarchal rules.
Males don’t participate in the care of the offspring.
Males don’t participate in the care of offspring.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it hasd been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodites, whatich is not the case.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it had been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodites, which is not the case.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, whatich says a lot about hyenas’ intelligence.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primate societies, which says a lot about hyena intelligence.
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Very interesting. Good work!
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MaybePerhaps the most popular one is the spotted hyena, thatwhich is the largest member of the family, with individual. Specimens ranginge from 40 kg to more than 80 Kkg.
Perhaps the most popular is the spotted hyena, which is the largest member of the family. Specimens range from 40 kg to more than 80 kg.
NIts neck and forequarterlegs are very developed whereas hindquarters are not thatas strong.
Its neck and forelegs are very developed whereas hindquarters are not as strong.
"Forequarters" is technically correct but it's an uncommon word.
That gives them thea very distinctive bear-like look with the forequarters being taller than the rear ones.
That gives them a very distinctive bear-like look.
The second part of the sentence sounds a little redundant.
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Their jaw strength is legendary.
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Relative to their size, they have one of the most powerful bites in the animal kingdom. For instance, their bite is 40% more powerful on average than that of a leopard.
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This strength allows them to feed on the bones, skin, and even waste of other animals.
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These hyenas never miss any opportunity for a meal!
It sounds like "they" refers to the hyena, not their prey. I changed the sentence to establish that consistency.
A couple of more maybHere are a couple more astonishing facts.
Here are a couple more astonishing facts.
Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules.
Hyena society is matriarchal.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite, w. However, it turns out that is not the case.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite. However, it turns out that is not the case.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, what says a lot about hyenas’. This indicates that hyenas are quite intelligencet.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies. This indicates that hyenas are quite intelligent.
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Some of the sentences sound a little unnatural or awkward, so I just suggested ways to improve flow. This looks really good! I found it easy to understand. I learned some interesting information too!
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Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, that is the largest member of the family, with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80 Kg.
Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, |
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Neck and forequarters are very developed whereas hindquarters are not that strong.
"Forequarters" is technically correct but it's an uncommon word.
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That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the forequarters being taller than the rear ones.
That gives them The second part of the sentence sounds a little redundant.
That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the fore |
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The power of their jaw is legendary.
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The power of their jaw |
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In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites of the animal world, in average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance.
In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites |
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This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and eve waste of other animals.
This This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and even on the waste of other animals. This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and even on the waste of other animals. |
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They don’t miss any opportunity of becoming a meal!
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They don’t miss any opportunity |
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Females are considerably larger than males. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules.
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Males don’t participate in the care of the offspring.
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Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite, what is not the case.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite
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Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, what says a lot about hyenas’ intelligence.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primate |
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