June 23, 2026
My Home
- My home
I live in Sejong, located in the middle of Korea.
There are many green spaces and parks.
That's because it has been developed according to a plan to make more places where people can enjoy themselves.
It has many government ministries and agencies; thus, there are tens of thousands of government officials in the city.
Many major political decisions in Korea have been made in Sejong.
- Kind of my home
I live in a flat on the 5th floor. The area of my home is around 1,200 sq ft.
- My Rooms
There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen and 1 living room in my home.
Two bedrooms are for our couple, and the other is for my children.
- My opinion
I'm totally satisfied with my home, which is convenient for our family to live in.
Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see
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I live in Sejong, located in the middle of Korea.
There are many green spaces and parks.
That's because it has been developed according to a plan to make more places where people can enjoy themselves.
It has many government ministries and agencies; thus, there are tens of thousands of government officials in the city.
Many major political decisions in Korea have been made in Sejong.
I live in a flat on the 5th floor.
The area of my home is around 1,200 sq ft.
There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen and 1 living room in my home.
Two bedrooms are for ourus as a couple, and the other is for my children.
Two bedrooms are for us as a couple, and the other is for my children.
Meaning is unclear - if you mean for the two spouses and want to keep couple, the above is one way to do so.
I'm totally satisfied with my home, which is convenient for our family to live in.
Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see
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Well done
That's because itey hasve been developed according towith a plan to make more places where people can enjoy themselves.
They have been developed with a plan to make more places where people can enjoy themselves.
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ItSejong has many government ministries and agencies; thus,, and there are tens of thousands of government officials in the city.
Sejong has many government ministries and agencies, and there are tens of thousands of government officials in the city.
Semicolons are very academic. I changed this to have a less heavy tone.
- KThe kind of my home I live in
- The kind of home I live in
"Kind of my home" sounds like you're saying "It's kind of my home", like it's not completely your home, or you don't believe it's your home. "The kind of home I live in" is a title that tells me that you're going to describe your house
Two bedrooms are for our couplemy partner and I, and the other is for my children.
Two bedrooms are for my partner and I, and the other is for my children.
"Our couple" sounds like you have an additional couple that also lives in your house. I think you mean you and your spouse. Or however you want to describe the person you're in a relationship with. Husband/wife/spouse if you're married, partner is more general. It doesn't give as much detail if you don't want to. Some people are more private and say "partner" or "spouse". Other people might say their boyfriend or girlfriend if they are younger.
Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see
There's nothing to see out your window? I think you mean your living room windows are excellent because they have a great view. (Of a park, perhaps?)
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Your English is really good, I just mostly made suggestions to sound even more native.
June 23, 2026
Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see
There's nothing to see out your window? I think you mean your living room windows are excellent because they have a great view. (Of a park, perhaps?)
What I meant was that there is an open view from my living room.
It's very common that other buildings are seen through windows in a flat.
Thanks for your help
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I live in Sejong, located in the middle of Korea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are many green spaces and parks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's because it has been developed according to a plan to make more places where people can enjoy themselves. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It has many government ministries and agencies; thus, there are tens of thousands of government officials in the city. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Semicolons are very academic. I changed this to have a less heavy tone. |
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Many major political decisions in Korea have been made in Sejong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Kind of my home
- "Kind of my home" sounds like you're saying "It's kind of my home", like it's not completely your home, or you don't believe it's your home. "The kind of home I live in" is a title that tells me that you're going to describe your house |
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I live in a flat on the 5th floor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The area of my home is around 1,200 sq ft. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen and 1 living room in my home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two bedrooms are for our couple, and the other is for my children.
Two bedrooms are for Meaning is unclear - if you mean for the two spouses and want to keep couple, the above is one way to do so.
Two bedrooms are for "Our couple" sounds like you have an additional couple that also lives in your house. I think you mean you and your spouse. Or however you want to describe the person you're in a relationship with. Husband/wife/spouse if you're married, partner is more general. It doesn't give as much detail if you don't want to. Some people are more private and say "partner" or "spouse". Other people might say their boyfriend or girlfriend if they are younger. |
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I'm totally satisfied with my home, which is convenient for our family to live in. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see This sentence has been marked as perfect! Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see Also, the view through the windows of the living room is excellent because there is nothing to see There's nothing to see out your window? I think you mean your living room windows are excellent because they have a great view. (Of a park, perhaps?) |
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