Nov. 22, 2020
11/23/20
According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from east Taihe station. The whole trip will take four hours. Taihe is a county that belongs to Fuyang, which is located in the northern part of Fuyang, and is 40 kilometers away from Fuyang. The high speed train in our city opened on the 1st of October last year. Fuyang is also the newest city in Anhui that owns a high speed train. This high speed railway started from Shangqiu and ended in Hangzhou with the whole journey of 750 kilometers. If you take a high speed train from Fuyang to Hangzhou, it will only take you a bit more than 3 hours. You know how long the distance is between Fuyang and Hangzhou? It is more than 600 kilometers long. How fast the high speed train is! In those days when our city didn’t have a high speed railway, if you drove a car to Hangzhou, the whole trip would take you 8 hours, even now, it’s the same. The high speed train is very convenient for people to travel on, and it saves a lot of time for people. Have you taken the high speed train yet? What about the high speed trains in your country?
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again, just wanted to add a more natural structure :)
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Really nice and informative article! Barely any mistakes, I just wanted to provide some different options that sound more natural :)
Nov. 23, 2020
Thank you very much. You helped me improve.
11/23/20
According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from the east Taihe station. According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from the east Taihe station.
The whole trip will take four hours.
Taihe is a county that belongs to Fuyang, which is located in the northern part of Fuyang, and is 40 kilometers away from Fuyang.
Taihe is a county that belongs to Fuyang, is located in the northern part of Fuyang, and is 40 kilometers away from Fuyang.
The high speed train in our city opened on the 1st of October last year.
Fuyang is also the newest city in Anhui that owns a high speed train.
This high speed railway started from Shangqiu and ended in Hangzhou with the whole journey of 750 kilometers.
If you take a high speed train from Fuyang to Hangzhou, it will only take you a bit more than 3 hours.
You know how long the distance is between Fuyang and Hangzhou?
It is more than 600 kilometers long.
How fast the high speed train is!
In those days when our city didn’t have a high speed railway, if you drove a car to Hangzhou, the whole trip would take you 8 hours, e. Even now, it’s the same.
In those days when our city didn’t have a high speed railway, if you drove a car to Hangzhou, the whole trip would take you 8 hours. Even now, it’s the same.
The high speed train is very convenient for people to travel on, and it saves a lot of time for people.
Have you taken the high speed train yet?
What about the high speed trains in your country?
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Very easy to read, good job :) America doesn't have any national high speed trains, but Joe Biden wants to build a high speed rail network! I would love to have good public transportation.
Nov. 23, 2020
Thank you for your corrections. The US is a great country and it is a nation with the biggest power in the world. As long as the nation decides to build it, the high speed railway will be built easily.
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According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from east Taihe station. According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from the east Taihe station. According to my older brother’s plan, today, he will return to Shanghai by high speed train from the east Taihe station.
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The whole trip will take four hours. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Taihe is a county that belongs to Fuyang, which is located in the northern part of Fuyang, and is 40 kilometers away from Fuyang.
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The high speed train in our city opened on the 1st of October last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fuyang is also the newest city in Anhui that owns a high speed train. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Fuyang is also the newest city in Anhui that own sounds a little off in this context. |
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This high speed railway started from Shangqiu and ended in Hangzhou with the whole journey of 750 kilometers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you take a high speed train from Fuyang to Hangzhou, it will only take you a bit more than 3 hours. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You know how long the distance is between Fuyang and Hangzhou? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is more than 600 kilometers long. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How fast the high speed train is! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
just wanted to add this because it sounds more natural. Nothing wrong with your sentence. |
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In those days when our city didn’t have a high speed railway, if you drove a car to Hangzhou, the whole trip would take you 8 hours, even now, it’s the same.
In those days when our city didn’t have a high speed railway, if you drove a car to Hangzhou, the whole trip would take you 8 hours
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The high speed train is very convenient for people to travel on, and it saves a lot of time for people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Have you taken the high speed train yet? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What about the high speed trains in your country? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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