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My memories in California

I had stayed in California for a month.
There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place.
I felt time passed by quickly…
I’d like to return there again!

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My memories in California

I had stayed in California for a month.

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My memories in California


My mMemories inof California My Memories of California

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I had stayed in California for a month.


I had stayed in California for a month. I stayed in California for a month.

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There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place.


There are a lot of beautiful placetowns, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place to be. There are a lot of beautiful towns, beaches and delicious food so California is my favorite place to be.

A beach can be a place, too, so I replaced "places" with "towns."

There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods, so California is my favorite place. There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods, so California is my favorite place.

I felt time passed by quickly…


It felt as if time passed by so quickly… It felt as if time passed by so quickly…

I felt like the time passed by quickly… I felt like the time passed by quickly…

I’d like to return there again!


I’d like to return therego back again! I’d like to go back again!

This is more natural in the US.

I’d like to return therego back again! I’d like to go back again!

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