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Chinese Lunar New Year

Today is a great day for most people from China. The traditional Chinese new year will start tomorrow.

Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them. They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, every family is happy to pay for it. Even if they have no money they probably borrow from others to make a nice meal.

I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and law-on-parents. My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us, I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website. Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent than Chinese men.

I remember When I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year. My older sister suggested me save money together with hers, she said if we saved together would make us buy more items. I immediately agreed with her without hesitation. She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at that time, although I didn't like them.

After my older sister worked, she also give me some money in such a moment, she never stint money on me.

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Chinese Lunar New Year

Today is a great day for most people from China.

Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them.

I immediately agreed with her without hesitation.

She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at that time, although I didn't like them.

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Chinese Lunar New Year

Today is a great day for most people from China.

Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them.

They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, every family is happy to pay for it.

Even if they have no money they probably borrow from others to make a nice meal.

My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us, I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website.

I immediately agreed with her without hesitation.

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Jan. 21, 2023

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Chinese Lunar New Year

The traditional Chinese new year will start tomorrow.

Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them.

My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us, I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website.

Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent than Chinese men.

I immediately agreed with her without hesitation.

She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at that time, although I didn't like them.

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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 21, 2023

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Chinese Lunar New Year

Today is a great day for most people from China.

The traditional Chinese new year will start tomorrow.

Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them.

I immediately agreed with her without hesitation.

She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at that time, although I didn't like them.

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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 21, 2023

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AfterWhen my older sister worked, she also giave me some money in such a moment,for the Lunar New Year, but she never stipent money on me.

I wasn't quite sure what you wanted to say here as 'stint' is not used like that in English, but I have tried my best to work it out.

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Jan. 25, 2023

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Maybe as David has corrected it to "Stingy" is better to put it here.

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Jan. 25, 2023

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Maybe as David has corrected it to "Stingy" is better to put it here.

The traditional Chinese new year will start tomorrow.


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The traditional Chinese nNew yYear will start tomorrow. The traditional Chinese New Year will start tomorrow.

We usually capitalize the phrase "New Year"

The traditional Chinese nNew yYear will start tomorrow. The traditional Chinese New Year will start tomorrow.

Chinese Lunar New Year


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Today is a great day for most people from China.


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Today is a great day for most people from ChinaChinese people. Today is a great day for most Chinese people.

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Some children are already waiting for their red envelopes with money in them.


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They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, every family is happy to pay for it.


They are also waiting for a sumptuouslavish meal tonight, every family is happy to pay for it. They are also waiting for a lavish meal tonight, every family is happy to pay for it.

'Sumptuous' is not a common word used in English, I would use 'lavish' instead.

They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, which every family is happy to pay for it. They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, which every family is happy to pay for.

this sounds more natural

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They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight, e. Every family is happy to pay for it. They are also waiting for a sumptuous meal tonight. Every family is happy to pay for it.

Even if they have no money they probably borrow from others to make a nice meal.


Even if they have no money, they probably borrow some from others to make a nice meal. Even if they have no money, they probably borrow some from others to make a nice meal.

Even if they have no money they will probably borrow from others to make a nice meal. Even if they have no money they will probably borrow from others to make a nice meal.

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Even if they have no money, they probably will borrow from others to make a nice meal. Even if they have no money, they probably will borrow from others to make a nice meal.

I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and law-on-parents.


I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and in-law-on-parents. I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and in-laws.

In English, you would say 'sister-in-law' for example, but for your partner's parents we would usually say 'in-laws'.

I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and law-on-parents-in-law. I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and parents-in-law.

I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and inlaw-on-parents. I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and inlaws.

Strangely, we don't really say "parents-in-law", at least where I'm from. You can use the word "inlaws" to talk about your mother-in-law and father-in-law.

I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and in-law-on-parents. I have prepared some red envelopes to give to my daughter, nephew, niece, parents and in-laws.

いい人ですよね!

My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us, I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website.


My wife is now making a sumptuous suppdinner for us, I right now, I just took a photo just now and will upload it to the website. My wife is making a sumptuous dinner for us right now, I just took a photo and will upload it to the website.

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My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us,. I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website. My wife is now making a sumptuous supper for us. I took a photo just now and will upload it to the website.

ありがとうございました!

Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent than Chinese men.


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Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellentuch better than Chinese men. Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are much better than Chinese men.

Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent thansuperior to Chinese men. Women from China are the best in my eyes, I have to admit that most Chinese women are superior to Chinese men.

Your original sentence is perfectly fine. I think my correction is a bit more natural. We don't usually say "more excellent" in my experience, either something is excellent or it's not. You can also say - surpass men in every regard - outshine men

Women from China are the best in my eyes,. I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent than Chinese men. Women from China are the best in my eyes. I have to admit that most Chinese women are more excellent than Chinese men.

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I remember When I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year.


I remember Wwhen I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year. I remember when I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year.

I remember Wwhen I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year. I remember when I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year.

I remember Wwhen I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year. I remember when I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year.

I remember Wwhen I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year. I remember when I was a child, my parents and some older relatives would give me some money on the eve of the Lunar New Year.

My older sister suggested me save money together with hers, she said if we saved together would make us buy more items.


My older sister suggested meI save my money together with hers, she said if we saved together it would make usallow us to buy more items. My older sister suggested I save my money together with hers, she said if we saved together it would allow us to buy more items.

My older sister suggested methat I save money together with hers,; she said if we saved together we would make usbe able to buy more items. My older sister suggested that I save money together with hers; she said if we saved together we would be able to buy more items.

My older sister suggested meto me to save my money together with hers, she said if we saved together it would make usallow us to buy more items. My older sister suggested to me to save my money together with hers, she said if we saved together it would allow us to buy more items.

I would put it simply "My sister suggested we combine our money together. She said that way we would be able to buy more valuable items."

My older sister suggested me savthat I save the money together with hers, s. She said that if we saved together would make uspooled our money, we could buy more itemthings. My older sister suggested that I save the money together with hers. She said that if we pooled our money, we could buy more things.

I immediately agreed with her without hesitation.


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She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at that time, although I didn't like them.


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She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at thate time, although I didn't like them. She used our money to buy some popular cassettes she enjoyed at the time, although I didn't like them.

It is fine to use "that time" here, but it's more natural to use "the time". "At the time" is kind of a common English phrase.

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After my older sister worked, she also give me some money in such a moment, she never stint money on me.


AfterWhen my older sister worked, she also giave me some money in such a moment,for the Lunar New Year, but she never stipent money on me. When my older sister worked, she gave me some money for the Lunar New Year, but she never spent money on me.

I wasn't quite sure what you wanted to say here as 'stint' is not used like that in English, but I have tried my best to work it out.

After my older sister worked, she also giave me some money in such a moment, she never stints money on me. After my older sister worked, she also gave me some money, she never stints money on me.

After my older sister started workeding, she also giave me some money in such a moment, she never stint. She was never stingy with her money onwith me. After my older sister started working, she also gave me some money. She was never stingy with her money with me.

The last sentence in my correction is a bit awkward I think. I tried to match your intention in the original post. You could also say: - She was generous with her money on my account - She never spared any expense for me But these have slightly different meanings.

After my older sister went to worked, she alswouldn't hesitate to give me some money inat such a moment, shes. She was never stingy about money onwith me. After my older sister went to work, she wouldn't hesitate to give me money at such moments. She was never stingy about money with me.

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