There are many artists that use the fashion as a way to express what they think and feel. There are many artists that use fashion as a way to express what they think and feel.

There are many artists that use the fashion as a way to express what they think and feel. There are many artists that use fashion as a way to express what they think and feel.

"la moda" = "fashion" (without the article "the")

With so mayuch publicity about these kind of clothes, the obsession for having the latest modelstyle of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc. has justonly increased betweenamong people. With so much publicity about these kind of clothes, the obsession for having the latest style of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc. has only increased among people.

A "model" isn't really used to describe clothing, we would say "style" here. However, new versions of vehicles/electronics/appliances would be new models. "Between" implies a count of two, where "among" implies a number larger than two.

With so mayuch publicity about these kind of clothes, the obsession forto havinge the latest modelstyle of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc has just increased betweenamong people. With so much publicity about these kind of clothes, the obsession to have the latest style of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc has just increased among people.

With so mayuch publicity about these kind of clothes the obsession for having the latest model of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc has just increased between people. With so much publicity about these kind of clothes the obsession for having the latest model of certain shirt, blouse, skirt, etc has just increased between people.

No one can be unaware of the fashion industry these days. No one can be unaware of the fashion industry these days.

You can also say "Everyone is aware of the fashion industry these days.".

It has grown enormously for the past few decades and also has the effect it has ihas a clear effect on our lifves. It has grown enormously for the past few decades and has a clear effect on our lives.

"has the effect it has in our lives" is a bit awkward to understand; it would be better to rephrase this for clarity.

It has grown enormously for the past decades and also has thhas a noticeable effect it has in our lifves. It has grown enormously for the past decades and has a noticeable effect in our lives.

the plural of "life" is "lives"

It has grow enormously for the past decades and also has the effect it hased in our lifves. It has grow enormously for the past decades and also has the effected in our lives.

The plural form of "life" is "lives", I know, English is confusing !

People begin to think about and look more at their own bodies and those of others' because they pay more attention to how they look in certain clothes. People begin to think about and look more at their own bodies and those of others because they pay more attention to how they look in certain clothes.

We look "at" thing and we think "about" things

People begin to think look more about their own bodies and those of others' because they pay more attention to how they look in certain clothes. People begin to think more about their own bodies and those of others because they pay more attention to how they look in certain clothes.

"of others" : you don't have to add an apostrophe to "others"

These can be associated with ideals of beautybeauty ideals, but also with status. These can be associated with beauty ideals, but also with status.

These can be associated with ideals of beauty, butbeauty ideals and also with status. These can be associated with beauty ideals and also with status.

Theseis can be associated with ideals of beauty, but also with status. This can be associated with ideals of beauty, but also with status.

There' are clothes that are really expensive and just a few can buywhich few people can buy/afford. There are clothes that are really expensive which few people can buy/afford.

You wouldn't typically see the contraction "there're" in written form. Having enough money to buy something = being able to afford it, another option for your sentence

There're clothes that are really expensive and are very expensive clothes that just a few can buyafford. There are very expensive clothes that just a few can afford.

"there are"

It just doesn't matter the price, jusit's just important to have it here and now. It doesn't matter the price, it's just important to have it here and now.

It just doesn't matter the price, just to have it here and now. It just doesn't matter the price, just to have it here and now.

I would rewrite this like this: The price doesn't matter, having it here and now is what matters.

It justthe price doesn't matter, the price, jusy just want to have it here and now. It the price doesn't matter, they just want to have it here and now.

But not only that, there' are cultures around the world that see the clothes they wear as a part of who they are as a community. But not only that, there are cultures around the world that see the clothes they wear as a part of who they are as a community.

But not only that, there' are cultures around the world that see the clothes they wear as a part of who they are as a community. But not only that, there are cultures around the world that see the clothes they wear as a part of who they are as a community.

"there are"

In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes in these timescontexts. In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes in these contexts.

I'm not sure what you mean by "these times." If you are referring back to your given examples, you could say "in these contexts."

In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes these times. In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes.

In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes these timourselves. In the end, it all depends on how we see clothes ourselves.