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I decide to practice English writing skills here every day and hope that a few months ago I can earn some rewards.
Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth. The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to trace the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths. The authors describe the story like a movie, with nice music they made playing on each of the chapters. I love the dialogue and the art in this comic. It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and once again. I am so impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.

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Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth.

I love the dialogue and the art in this comic.

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Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth.

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I am sowas impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.

The words 'impressed by a story' aren't used that often. You could try, 'addicted to this...' , 'enraptured' or 'I loved this...' Or you could say you were, impressed by the plot/ quality of the story/ characters/ dialogue. To say impressed by, name something specific you liked.

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I decide to practice English writing skills here every day and hope that a few months ago I can earn some rewards.


I've decided to practice English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months ago I can earn some rewards.I will have made an improvement. I've decided to practice English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months I will have made an improvement.

Or you could use the phrase, 'reap my rewards'.

I have decided to practice my English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months ago I can earn some rewardslevel up my writing. I have decided to practice my English writing skills here every day and I hope that in a few months I can level up my writing.

Today, I want to recommend a comic I have read recently called Purple Hyacinth.


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The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to trace the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths.


The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, want to traceassesses suspects in order to discover the truth behind her parent's and a best friend's deaths. The story is about a policewoman, who assesses suspects in order to discover the truth behind her parent's and best friend's deaths.

If you mean one parent, it'd be parent's. If you are talking about the plural it'd be parents'.

The story is about a policewoman, who can detect others' lies, wanould easily identify whether somebody is lying and she uses this gift to trace the truth behind her parent's' and aher best friend's deaths. The story is about a policewoman who could easily identify whether somebody is lying and she uses this gift to trace the truth behind her parents' and her best friend's deaths.

The authors describe the story like a movie, with nice music they made playing on each of the chapters.


The authors describnarrate the story like a movieas if it were a film, with nice music they made playing oin each of the chapters. The authors narrate the story as if it were a film, with music playing in each of the chapters.

The authors describes the story like aas if it was a live-action movie, with nice music they madebeing playinged on each of the chapters. The author describes the story as if it was a live-action movie with music being played on each of the chapters.

I love the dialogue and the art in this comic.


I love the dialogue and the art in this comic. I love the dialogue and art in this comic.

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It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and once again.


It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and oncemakes me want to read it again and again. It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story makes me want to read it again and again.

It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the story lies in a way that attracts me to read it once and onceplot makes me want to read it again and again. It is a slow burn, but the beauty of the plot makes me want to read it again and again.

I am so impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.


I am sowas impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week. I was impressed with this story and expect to read the new chapter next week.

The words 'impressed by a story' aren't used that often. You could try, 'addicted to this...' , 'enraptured' or 'I loved this...' Or you could say you were, impressed by the plot/ quality of the story/ characters/ dialogue. To say impressed by, name something specific you liked.

I am sowas really impressed with thise story and expectline/plot and I look forward to read theing its new chapter next week. I was really impressed with the storyline/plot and I look forward to reading its new chapter next week.

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