Feb. 25, 2021
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To be honest, it's really tough for me to study English at my current age. Many times I want to give up, but I don't. Although English brings me a lot of friends and fun, it also brings me a lot of hardships. Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey. Learning English can not bring me any financial benefits. It just helps me kill time. Even if I don't learn it, no one would blame me. Why do I have to do this suffering thing? I don't want to waste time, I don't want to hang around doing nothing. I think it is always good to learn something new, to improve myself. Only by doing so won't I regret it when I leave the world.
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To be honest, it's really tough for me to study English at my current age.
Many times I want to give up, but I don't.
Although English brings me a lot of friends and fun, it also brings me a lot of hardships.
Although English brings me a lot of friends and fun, it also brings me a lot of hardship.
What you wrote isn't wrong, but we would probably write "hardship" in the singular here, even though it covers many events
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey.
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all obstacles in my English learning journey.
Learning English canwill not bring me any financial benefits.
Learning English will not bring me any financial benefits.
I can't tell exactly what you meant.
I think either you mean that it won't bring you any benefits, in which case use the above, or if you mean that it may not, then use:
"Learning English may not bring me any..."
That is, the first version is definite, and the second is uncertain
It just helps me kill time.
Even if I don't learn it, no one wouldill blame me.
Even if I don't learn it, no one will blame me.
I made the tenses consistent.
Or you can make them both hypothetical (contrary to fact) like so:
Even if I didn't learn it, no one would blame me.
Why do I have to do this suffering thing? Why do I have to do this suffering thing?
What you wrote is correct and fluent, but you could also say:
Why do I have to suffer like this?
I don't want to waste time, and I don't want to hang around doing nothing. I don't want to waste time, and I don't want to hang around doing nothing.
Either the comma needs a connecting word, or it should be a semi-colon
I think it is always good to learn something new, to improve myself.
Only by doing so won't I regreill I not it when I leave the world.
Only by doing so will I not it when I leave the world.
Your phrasing was not wrong, but sounded odd.
Feb. 25, 2021
Thank you very much.
Feb. 25, 2021
Only by doing so won't I regreill I not it when I leave the world.
Your phrasing was not wrong, but sounded odd.
“Will you not (regret) it?”Did you forget the word “regret” ?
Feb. 25, 2021
Learning English canwill not bring me any financial benefits.
I can't tell exactly what you meant.
I think either you mean that it won't bring you any benefits, in which case use the above, or if you mean that it may not, then use:
"Learning English may not bring me any..."
That is, the first version is definite, and the second is uncertain
Are “can’t” is totally wrong in this sentence? Since “will not” is fit here, I think “can’t” here should be right. It can’t bring me....... it won’t bring me.......... what the different between them?
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey. Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey.
Bad memories and slow thinking are all obstacles I face in my English learning journey.
Learning English can not bring me any financial benefits. Learning English can not bring me any financial benefits.
Learning English can't bring me any financial benefits.
Why do I have to do this suffering thing? Why do I have to do this suffering thing?
Why do I have to suffer?
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very good english, so don't ever feel discouraged because you're doing amazing and you could make loads of great english-speaking friends! <3
Feb. 25, 2021
Thank you very much
Journal
To be honest, it's really tough for me to study English at my current age.
Many times I want to give up, but I don't.
Although English brings me a lot of friends and fun, it also brings me a lot of hardships.
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey.
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all obstacles in my English learning journey.
Learning English can not bring me any financial benefits.
It just helps me kill time.
Even if I don't learn it, no one would blame me.
Why do I have to do this suffering thing?
I don't want to waste time, I don't want to hang around doing nothing.
I think it is always good to learn something new, to improve myself.
Only by doing so I won't I regret it when I leave the world.
Only by doing so I won't regret it when I leave the world.
Feedback
Good stuff - your english is very good. I hope you continue learning and using it for many years to come
Feb. 25, 2021
Thank you very much
Journal
To be honest, it's really tough for me to study English at my current age.
Many times I want to give up, but I don't.
Although English brings me a lot of friends and fun, it also brings me a lot of hardships.
Bad memories, slow thinking, are all the obstacles in my English learning journey.
Learning English can not bring me any financial benefits.
It just helps me kill time.
Even if I don't learn it, no one would blame me.
Why do I have to do this suffering thing?
I don't want to waste time, I don't want to hang around doing nothing.
I think it is always good to learn something new, to improve myself.
Only by doing so won't I regret it when I leave the world.
Feedback
It's good to learn new things! But you shouldn't suffer to learn or to waste time. Maybe you can try something new instead of continuing to learn English. I wish you good luck!
Feb. 25, 2021
I will continue to learn it. Thank you very much.
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