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Recently I started to play the game named "clair obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know this pronunciation), and it was splendid! Scene was magnificent and music was beautiful. This probably will be the one of games of my life.

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This probably will be the one of games of my life.


This probably will be the one of games of my lifeis one of the best games I've ever played. This is one of the best games I've ever played.

This will probably will be the one ofbe one of the best games of my life. This will probably be one of the best games of my life.

This probably will be the one of the best games of my life. This probably will be one of the best games of my life.

(1) "Probably will" is fine here. However, I think in most situations, "will probably" might sound more natural, because "probably will" actualy places emphasis on "will", which isn't always needed. (2) Alternatively: "This will probably be one of the best games I've ever played in my life."

MORE VIVIDLY: This probably will be the one of games of my life.my favorite games ever! MORE VIVIDLY: This probably will be the one of my favorite games ever!

This will probably will be the one of my favourite games of my lifall time. This will probably be the one of my favourite games of all time.

This will probably will be the one of the best games of my life. This will probably be the one of the best games of my life.

I don't know what adjective you wanted to describe the game so I assumed "best"

Did anything make your hear beat faster recently?


Did anything make your heart beat faster recently? Did anything make your heart beat faster recently?

Did anything make your heart beat faster recently? Did anything make your heart beat faster recently?

Did anything make your heart beat faster recently? Did anything make your heart beat faster recently?

Did anything make your heart beat faster recently? Did anything make your heart beat faster recently?

Recently I started to play the game named "clair obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know this pronunciation), and it was splendid!


Recently I started to play thea game namcalled "cClair oObscur: Expedition 33"( (I don't know this pronunciation), and it was splendid! Recently I started to play a game called "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" (I don't know this pronunciation), and it was splendid!

(1) "started to play the game" is okay, but there's a subtle difference between "the" and "a" that I want to point out. "The" emphasises that it's Clair Obscur specifically that you played (as opposed to any other game), while "a" only emphasises the fact that you played a game. In this case and most situations, "a" would be more natural, but of course it depends on what you'd intended to convey. (2) Game titles are considered names, and should be properly capitalised.

Recently I started to play the game named "cClair oObscur Expedition 33"( I don't know thow this is pronunciationed), and it was splendid! Recently I started to play the game named "Clair Obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know how this is pronunced), and it was splendid!

Cf. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clair_Obscur:_Expedition_33

Recently I started to play the game named "cClair oObscur Expedition 33"( I don't know thise pronunciation), and it was splendid! Recently I started to play the game named "Clair Obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know the pronunciation), and it was splendid!

Recently I started to play thea game named "clair obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know thishot to pronounciatione jt), and it was splendid! Recently I started to play a game named "clair obscur Expedition 33"( I don't know hot to pronounce jt), and it was splendid!

Recently, I started to play the game named "c"Clair oObscur: Expedition 33"( (I don't know thise pronunciation), and it was splendid! Recently, I started to play the game "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" (I don't know the pronunciation), and it was splendid!

I don't think "named" is required, and if it was then it would be "called" because it's inanimate Titles are capitalized (unless specifically uncapitalized)

Scene was magnificent and music was beautiful.


SThe scene was magnificent and the music was beautiful. The scene was magnificent and the music was beautiful.

SThe scenes wasere magnificent and music was beautiful. The scenes were magnificent and music was beautiful.

SThe scenes wasere magnificent and the music was beautiful. The scenes were magnificent and the music was beautiful.

(1) You should place "the" before "scenes" to indicate that it's the game's scenes that you're referring to specifically. The same goes for "the music". (2) I made "scene" plural, because I assume that there are more than one scene in the game. Alternatively: "The scenery was magnificent". In this case, "scenery" is an uncountable noun.

SOPTION A: The scenes wasere magnificent and its music was beautiful. OPTION B: The scenes are magnificent and its music wais beautiful. OPTION A: The scenes were magnificent and its music was beautiful. OPTION B: The scenes are magnificent and its music is beautiful.

I prefer OPTION B, although OPTION A is also possible.

Scene was magnificent and music was beautiful. Scene was magnificent and music was beautiful.

Is it the scene or a scene in particular

SThe scenery was magnificent and music was beautiful. The scenery was magnificent and music was beautiful.

"Scene" refers to a specific moment, "scenery" is how a scene looks and can be used for the general scenery

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