I've finished the translation and sent ithem to my friend forso theiry can help of censoringme edit. I've finished the translation and sent it to my friend so they can help me edit.

To edit = to correct mistakes and improve the writing To censor = when the government or authorities cut out information that they don't want the public to know

I hope everything goes well, though I am so worried now. I hope everything goes well, though I am so worried now.

I am afraid of changing especially the policy. I am afraid of changing especially the policy.

Not sure what this means - can you leave me a comment and I can try to help?

I found out that when I becaome nervours, my stomach aches. I found out that when I become nervous, my stomach aches.

Present simple to describe a habitual action.

But I am getting better because I am controlling my fucture. But I am getting better because I am controlling my future.