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July 1, 2020

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My favorite movie

Today, I'll talk about my favorite movie. I think Armageddon is the best movie I've ever seen. It's a Bruce Willis movie and this story is about meteorite. He is the boss of a drilling petroleum company. He and his co-workers go to the space to drill out meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in that. Then, they blow meteorite up to defend the earth from that. I was so impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it. By the way, I have already seen it about 10 times. I recommend seeing it.

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July 2, 2020

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My favorite movie

Today, I'll talk about my favorite movie.

I think Armageddon is the best movie I've ever seen.

I was so impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it.

By the way, I have already seen it about 10 times.

I recommend seeing it.

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kazu

July 2, 2020

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My favorite movie

Today, I'll talk about my favorite movie.

I think Armageddon is the best movie I've ever seen.

By the way, I have already seen it about 10 times.

I recommend seeing it.

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kazu

July 2, 2020

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My favorite movie


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Today, I'll talk about my favorite movie.


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I think Armageddon is the best movie I've ever seen.


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It's a Bruce Willis movie and this story is about meteorite.


It's a Bruce Willis movie and this story is about a meteorite. It's a Bruce Willis movie about a meteorite.

I also made the sentence simpler

It's a Bruce Willis movie and this story is about a meteorite. It's a Bruce Willis movie and this story is about a meteorite.

"a" meteorite, because there are many meteorites and we are only talking about one meteorite. As others pointed out, you can shorten it. Another option is to use the word "it". It's a Bruce Willis movie and it is about a meteorite. "it" can refer back to the subject of the sentence.

It's a Bruce Willis movie and thise story is about a meteorite. It's a Bruce Willis movie and the story is about a meteorite.

He is the boss of a drilling petroleum company.


He is the boss of a drilling petroleum company. He is the boss of a petroleum company.

He is the boss of a drilling petroleum drilling company. also can be called an "oil drilling company." He is the boss of a petroleum drilling company. also can be called an "oil drilling company"

He is the boss of a drilling petroleumn oil company. He is the boss of an oil company.

He and his co-workers go to the space to drill out meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in that.


He and his co-workers go to the space to drill out meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in thait. He and his co-workers go to space to drill out meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in it.

He and his co-workers go to the space to drill outa meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in that. He and his co-workers go to space to drill a meteorite and plant nuclear bomb in that.

space referring to outer space is one of those special words that does not require "the". Again, we use "a" meteorite because we are talking about one meteorite in general.

He and his co-workers go to the space to drill out a meteorite and plant a nuclear bomb in thait. He and his co-workers go to space to drill out a meteorite and plant a nuclear bomb in it.

Then, they blow meteorite up to defend the earth from that.


Then, they blow meteorite up to defend the earth from thabeing hit. Then, they blow meteorite up to defend the earth from being hit.

Then, they blow the meteorite up to defend the earth from that. Then, they blow the meteorite up to defend the earth from that.

In this case, we use "the" meteorite because we are being specific. For example, the cat or the mouse compared to a cat or a mouse.

Then, they blow the meteorite up to defend the earth from that. Then, they blow the meteorite up to defend the earth.

I'm not sure what you're referring to with "that".

I was so impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it.


I was sovery impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it. I was very impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it.

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I was sovery impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it. I was very impressed by the last scene, but I won't go into detail about the content because I want you to see it.

By the way, I have already seen it about 10 times.


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I recommend seeing it.


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