My dDog (Alfie) My Dog (Alfie)

Titles need capitals, brackets is a stylistic recommendation.

My dog’s name is Alfie, Hhe is souch a sweet and affectionate boy. My dog’s name is Alfie, he is such a sweet and affectionate boy.

Such a - implies a lot (stylistic) Commas don’t equal a capital

My dog Alfie, He is souch a sweet and affectionate boy. My dog Alfie is such a sweet and affectionate boy.

He loves his walk.s./He loves going on a walk. He loves his walks./He loves going on a walk.

Walks = plural, a habit/activity.

He loves histo go for walks. He loves to go for walks.

You can also say, "He loves to be taken for walks."

He’s a very charming boy. He’s a very charming boy.

“He’s a good dog.” “He’s annoying.” “He’s a strange person.” Adjectives don’t need ‘a’, but extended descriptions do need an a.

He’s a very charming boy. He’s a very charming boy.

One time he stole thsome donuts that I bought and ate it all.them. One time he stole some donuts that I bought and ate them.

One time he stole thea donut and ate it all. One time he stole a donut and ate it all.

He is out going and love his walks meeting new and meetold friends. He is outgoing and loves meeting new and old friends.

You’ve already said walk so I’ve corrected it.

He is out going and love hiss to go for walks and meet friends. He is outgoing and loves to go for walks and meet friends.

"Outgoing" is written as one word.

He followed ms me around the house every single day. He follows me around the house every single day.

Just some context and follows me - implies a continuing habit into the present, followed = past participle = the past

He followeds me every single day. He follows me every single day.

You could use "followed" if you were talking about something your dog did in the past. Since you are talking about something he still does (his current actions), this sentence should be in the present tense too.

It’s cute tho. It’s cute tho.

It’s cute, though. It’s cute, though.

I love him to bits.H Also, he hates having a baths. I love him to bits. Also, he hates having baths.

These are two separate things so I’ve added ‘also’. “He hates zoos.” “He hates dogs.” It needs to be a plural to imply all baths.

I love him to bits. He hates having a bath. I love him to bits. He hates having a bath.