March 3, 2021
Journal 1
1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with. These days, my dreams are so vivid as if I am watching a movie. Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid? Maybe I should attempt writing a scenario or something out of them haha.
2. I’m starting to learn English again. (Brushing up memories)
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US... Always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
Languages we use often shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world. I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English. (Plus chatting with friends and writing a journal are such different things)
Anyhow I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean.
3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby. Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to haha. The gyms that I like are so expensive. Plus doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day.
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Journal 1
1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with.
These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie. These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie.
Comma needed: separate phrase.
Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid?
Maybe I should attempttry writing a scenario or something out of them, haha.
Maybe I should try writing something out of them, haha.
No reason to have "a scenario or": we already know that from something. Try sounds less formal than attempt, though attempt would work. You need a comma after "haha" because it's a add-on.
2. I’m starting to learn English again.
(Brushing up and memories) (Brushing up and memories)
Two different thoughts: you could brush up on your English or think of memories.
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US...
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I spent almost 7 years in the US...
AI always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
I always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
You always need pronouns before a verb.
Languages we use oftenWe often use languages shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world.
We often use languages shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world.
You don't need languages first: it's a direct object. Put "often" in between we and use.
I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English.
(Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things) (Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things)
Put "in" because you put a writing in the journal.
Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean.
3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby.
Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to, haha.
Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to climbing gyms as often as I like to, haha.
The gyms that I like are so expensive.
Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day.
March 3, 2021
It messed it up so I couldn't put my comment after that. Great job!! I've been having weird quarantine dreams and I think that's a thing now. Good job, felt like it was advanced! :)
March 3, 2021
Thank you for your comments ^^ Yes, it really must be a thing, then,, perhaps due to this abnormal pandemic situation, haha
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1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, my dreams are so vivid as if I am watching a movie. These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie. These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie. Comma needed: separate phrase. |
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Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe I should attempt writing a scenario or something out of them haha.
Maybe I should No reason to have "a scenario or": we already know that from something. Try sounds less formal than attempt, though attempt would work. You need a comma after "haha" because it's a add-on. |
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2. I’m starting to learn English again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Brushing up memories) (Brushing up and memories) (Brushing up and memories) Two different thoughts: you could brush up on your English or think of memories. |
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It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US...
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I |
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Always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
You always need pronouns before a verb. |
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Languages we use often shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world.
You don't need languages first: it's a direct object. Put "often" in between we and use. |
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I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Plus chatting with friends and writing a journal are such different things) (Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things) (Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things) Put "in" because you put a writing in the journal. |
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Anyhow I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. |
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3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to haha.
Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to |
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The gyms that I like are so expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Plus doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. |
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