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It Was Very Cold Yesterday
It was very cold yesterday. I usually use the heater, but it was still really cold,
so I turnd up the heat. I think I'll post simple conversation.
It’s a situation where you decide what to order while looking at the menu.
Ellie ： Finally, it's lunchtime! So hungry.
Molly： I'm really hungry because I haven't eaten anything since this morning.
(While we check the menu…)
Ellie：What do you want to eat?
Molly：What should I get?
Ellie：I can't decide what to get.
I wonder if I should get a Japanese set meals? or
I'm wondering if I shold choose a Japanese set meals?
Molly：I'll have the tomato and garlic pasta set, and desert after the meal.
Ellie :What comes with the pasta set menu?
Molly: The pasta set comes with a salad, soup, and a drink.
I’m wondering if I should get a cup of coffee. or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee.
Ellie : Sounds good!!! I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke after meal.
昨日はものすごく寒かった。暖房をつけているんだけど、それでも寒かったので設定温度を
上げました。
それでは、シンプルな会話を投稿しようと思います。
今回は、レストランでのメニューを見ながら注文を決める場面です。
エリー：やっとお昼だ〜。お腹すいたね。
モリー：ほんと、お腹空いたわ。朝から何も食べてないからペコペコ。
(メニューを見ながら)
エリー：何にする？
モリー：何にしようかな？
エリー：迷うよね。私は和食セットにしようかな？
モリー：私はトマトとニンニクのパスタセットと食後にデザートを注文するよ。。
エリー: パスタセットには何がついてるの？
モリー:パスタとサラダとスープと飲み物だよ。飲み物はコーヒーにしようかな？
エリー:それもいいね！私は和食セットと食後にコーラにするよ。
It Was Very Cold Yesterday
It was very cold yesterday.
I usually use the heater, but it was still really cold,
If we're talking about today now, it might be good to specify, "...but it was still really cold today." (Or, "...but it's still been really cold today.")
so I turned up the heat.
I think I'll post a simple conversation.
It’s a situation where youpeople are decideing what to order while looking at the menu.
Ellie ：
Finally, it's lunchtime!
SI'm so hungry.!
Molly：
I'm really hungry becauseYeah, I'm starving. I haven't eaten anything since this morning.
I think I agree with another user's post on this matter. This sounds a lot more natural.
(While we checking the menu…)
Is one of the people in this conversation you? The use of "we" would imply that you are in this group.
Ellie：What do you want to eat?
Molly：What should I get?
Ellie：I can't decide what to get.
I wonder if I should get a Japanese set meals?
or
I'm wondering if I should choose a Japanese set meals?
The former with "I wonder if..." sounds more natural to me.
Molly：: I'll have the tomato and garlic pasta set, and dessert after the meal.
A "desert" is a dry, arid environment usually covered in sand. But "dessert" is a type of sweet food for after a meal. Actually, I'm a bit embarrassed to admit that I just had to look up which was which to make sure I hadn't gotten them mixed up.
Ellie : What comes with the pasta set menu?
Molly:
The pasta set comes with a salad, soup, and a drink.
Alternatively: "It comes with a salad, soup, and drink."
I’m wondering if I should get a cup of coffee.
or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee.
Yet again, the sentence with "I wonder if..." sounds better to me. You might hear both, though.
Alternatively, we might say, "Maybe I should get a coffee?"
Ellie : Sounds good!!!
I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke for after the meal.
I think "coke" is *technically* supposed to be capitalized since it's (an abbreviation of) a brand, "Coca-Cola", or just "Coke". However, I'm not sure if this actually matters much.
Feedback
Overall, very well done! Keep up the good work!
SI'm so hungry.
I'm really hungry becauseYeah, I'm starving. I haven't eaten anything at all since this morning.
The original sentence is correct. This correction is another way to write it based on the original text and to make it sound more casual, since this is what the situation seems to be.
(While we checklooking at the menu…)
Original sentence is correct, this is another way to write it. Both are about the same in terms of sounding natural.
I wonder if I should get a Japanese set meals?
I think this one sounds more natural than the other version of the sentence. I also agree with ghelgheli's suggestion that you can use "combo" as well.
Another option that is a little more casual sounding: "I wonder if I should go with a Japanese set meal."
or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee.
I think this version of the sentence sounds more natural.
Feedback
The sentences I didn't correct I agree with ghelgheli's corrections.
It Was Very Cold Yesterday
It was very cold yesterday.
I usually use the heater, but it was still really cold,
so I turned up the heat.
I think I'll post a simple conversation.
It’s a situation where you decide what to order while looking at the menu.
Ellie ：
Finally, it's lunchtime!
So hungry.
Molly：
I'm really hungry because I haven't eaten anything since this morning.
(While we check the menu…)
Ellie：What do you want to eat?
Molly：What should I get?
Ellie：I can't decide what to get.
I wonder if I should get a Japanese set meals?
You could also say "combo", though that might be less specific than "set meal" (but it sounds more natural).
or
I'm wondering if I should choose a Japanese set meals?
Molly：I'll have the tomato and garlic pasta set, and desert after the meal.
Ellie : What comes with the pasta set menu?
Molly:
The pasta set comes with a salad, soup, and a drink.
I’m wondering if I should get a cup of coffee.
or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee.
Ellie : Sounds good!!!
I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke after the meal.
today
Thank you so much. 😀
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The original sentence is correct. This correction is another way to write it based on the original text and to make it sound more casual, since this is what the situation seems to be.
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I'm wondering if I shold choose a Japanese set meals? I'm wondering if I should choose a Japanese set meal I'm wondering if I should choose a Japanese set meal The former with "I wonder if..." sounds more natural to me. |
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Molly：I'll have the tomato and garlic pasta set, and desert after the meal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Molly A "desert" is a dry, arid environment usually covered in sand. But "dessert" is a type of sweet food for after a meal. Actually, I'm a bit embarrassed to admit that I just had to look up which was which to make sure I hadn't gotten them mixed up. |
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I’m wondering if I should get a cup of coffee. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I think this version of the sentence sounds more natural. or I wonder if I should get a cup of coffee. Yet again, the sentence with "I wonder if..." sounds better to me. You might hear both, though. Alternatively, we might say, "Maybe I should get a coffee?" |
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I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke after meal. I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke after the meal. I'll have the Japanese set meal and a coke for after the meal. I think "coke" is *technically* supposed to be capitalized since it's (an abbreviation of) a brand, "Coca-Cola", or just "Coke". However, I'm not sure if this actually matters much. |
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