Oct. 14, 2021
Picture Books
I bought 11picture books at online flea market site. All of them are written both in English and Japanese. In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud.
I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English. One day, I become a grandma, I hope to read them for my grandchildren as well.
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Picture Books
I bought 11 picture books aton an online flea market site.
I bought 11 picture books on an online flea market.
Writing "online" makes "site" a bit redundant; the meaning is implied.
All of them are written both in English and Japanese.
In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud.
I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English.
One day, when I become a grandma, I hope to read them forto my grandchildren as well.
One day, when I become a grandma, I hope to read them to my grandchildren as well.
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This sounds like a lot of fun ahead! I hope you enjoy them greatly, and that one day your future grandchildren will too!
Oct. 14, 2021
Thank you for your corrections and saying that!
Yeah, I hope so too!
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Picture Books This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought 11picture books at online flea market site.
I bought 11 picture books Writing "online" makes "site" a bit redundant; the meaning is implied. |
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All of them are written both in English and Japanese. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition, they have CDs with them, so I can practice reading them out loud. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to read them with one of my students whose mother tongue is English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One day, I become a grandma, I hope to read them for my grandchildren as well.
One day, when I become a grandma, I hope to read them |
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