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April 22, 2020

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How to improve your brain

Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine improved your mind, or some kind of food stimulated your brain. Now, it is not proved, however, that those things itself does not do anything good to your brain. Then, what can make your brain work better? Use it. The more you work out your brain, the more it develops.


ずいぶん以前に、ある薬を飲めば頭が非常によくなるとか、ある食物を食べると大変頭の働きが活発になる、といわれたことがあった。しかし、現在では、薬や食べ物そのものがすぐ頭の働きをよくするとは証明されていない。では、頭の働きはどうすればよくなるのか。それは使う以外にない。使えば使うほどよくなるのである。

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How to improve your brain

The more you work out your brain, the more it develops.

Use it.

The more you work out your brain, the more it develops.

How to improve your brain


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Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine improved your mind, or some kind of food stimulated your brain.


Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine improveds your mind, or that some kind of food stimulateds your brain. Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine improves your mind, or that some kind of food stimulates your brain.

Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine could improved your mind, or that some kind of food could stimulated your brain. Long ago, it was said that some kind of medicine could improve your mind, or that some kind of food could stimulate your brain.

Now, it is not proved, however, that those things itself does not do anything good to your brain.


Now, it is notIt hasn't been proved, however, that those things itself does not do anything good to your brain. It hasn't been proved however, that those things do anything good to your brain.

Now, it iIt was not provedn, however, that those things itself does notalone could do anything good to your brain. It was not proven, however, that those things alone could do anything good to your brain.

By writing "Now", do you want to say that the positive effects were never proven?

Then, what can make your brain work better?


ThenSo, what can make your brain work better? So, what can make your brain work better?

The sentence sounds to me a bit odd with "then" in the beginning.

Use it.


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Useing it. Using it.

The more you work out your brain, the more it develops.


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