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Swimming Time

I used to swim a lot when we had gone to pool or a sea side. My family had a hard time to deal with me because I was so energytic that not getting out from the water. I have changed, these years I prefer lying on the bench in sea side or a pool side. I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just sliding my phone. I do not swim much if I am in the water this might be the only time that you can see my while swimming because I probably will not get into the water in the exact day. I do not know the reason why I changed maybe because I am enough with swimming from my childhood years so right now I enjoy lying more than swimming.

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I used to swim a lot when we had gone to pool or a sea side.


I used to swim a lot when we had gonego to a pool or a sea side. I used to swim a lot when we go to a pool or a sea side.

I used to swim a lot when we had gone towent to the pool or ato the sea side. I used to swim a lot when we went to the pool or to the sea side.

I used to swim a lot when we had gone towent to the pool or a sea side. I used to swim a lot when we went to the pool or seaside.

We had gone --> Implies that "going" was incidental when something else more important had happened. For example, "We had gone to the store when I saw Martha." In this example, seeing Martha was the important detail, going to the store was just incidental.

My family had a hard time to deal with me because I was so energytic that not getting out from the water.


My family had a hard time to dealing with me because I was so energyetic thatand because I was not getting out from the water. My family had a hard time dealing with me because I was so energetic and because I was not getting out from the water.

My family had a hard time to dealing with me because I was so energyetic that noand I wouldn’t getting out ofrom the water. My family had a hard time dealing with me because I was so energetic and I wouldn’t get out of the water.

Not exactly sure what you meant to say here so I made some assumptions.

My family had a hard time to dealing with me because I was so energyetic that not gettingI didn't want to get out ofrom the water. My family had a hard time dealing with me because I was so energetic that I didn't want to get out of the water.

"To have a hard time [verb]ing" is a great expression in this context - good work! Just make sure you're using an -ing verb instead of a "to-" infinitive. I was exactly the same way when I was younger. You could never get me out of the water in the summer!

I have changed, these years I prefer lying on the bench in sea side or a pool side.


I have changed, these because for the past few years I prefer lying on the bench in sea side or a pool side. I have changed because for the past few years I prefer lying on the bench in sea side or a pool side.

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I have changed, these year and nowadays I prefer lying on the bench ina lounge chair sea side or a pool side. I have changed and nowadays I prefer lying on a lounge chair seaside or poolside.

I have changed, these yeardays I prefer lying on the bench inat the sea side or a pool sideby the pool. I have changed, these days I prefer lying on the bench at the seaside or by the pool.

"These days" expresses a reference to current times. "These years" sounds a little awkward used like this. Maybe "lounger" would work better than "bench" in this sentence? It sounds a bit more comfortable.

I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just sliding my phone.


I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just slidingcrolling on my phone. I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just scrolling on my phone.

not sliding bro

I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just slidingcroll on my phone. I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just scroll on my phone.

I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just slidingcroll on my phone. I love to drink cold beverages, chat with my family/friends or just scroll on my phone.

I do not swim much if I am in the water this might be the only time that you can see my while swimming because I probably will not get into the water in the exact day.


I do notn't really swim much i. If I am in the water, this might be the only time that you can see mye while swimming because I probably will not get into the water ion the exactsame day. I don't really swim much. If I am in the water, this might be the only time you can see me while swimming because I probably will not get into the water on the same day.

What are u tryna say I cant understand

I do not swim much ianymore. If I am in the water this might be the only time that you can see my while swimming because I probably will not get into the water in the exactevery day. I do not swim much anymore. If I am in the water this might be the only time that you can see me swimming because I probably will not get in the water every day.

Not sure what you meant here.

I do not swim much i. If I am in the water, this might be the only time that you can see my while swimming because I probably will not get into the water in the exactevery day. I do not swim much. If I am in the water, this might be the only time that you can see me swimming because I probably will not get into the water every day.

I broke this sentence into two parts: 1. I do not swim much (establishes a reason/precedent) 2. You might only see me in the water once (establishes a consequence). There are a few different ways you can turn this phrase: "I don't swim much [anymore]. If you catch me in the water, it may be the only time you see me swimming because I probably won't be in the water every day." sounds somewhat more natural to me.

I do not know the reason why I changed maybe because I am enough with swimming from my childhood years so right now I enjoy lying more than swimming.


I do not know the reason why I changed maybe because I am enough with swimming from my childhood years so right now, probably because I'm tired of swimming, so I enjoy lying more than swimming. I do not know the reason why I changed, probably because I'm tired of swimming, so I enjoy lying more than swimming.

I do not know the reason why I changed m. Maybe it’s because I amhad enough with swimming from my childhood years so right now I enjoy lyounging more than swimming. I do not know why I changed. Maybe it’s because I had enough with swimming from my childhood years so right now I enjoy lounging more than swimming.

I do not know the reason why I changed m. Maybe because I amhad enough with swimming from my childhood years, so right now I enjoy lying back more than swimming. I do not know the reason why I changed. Maybe because I had enough with swimming from my childhood years, so right now I enjoy lying back more than swimming.

Good phrases! "To have enough" is a good idiomatic expression that I can see you tried to use. Great work! Some suggested phrasings: 1. "I do not know why I changed" (the words 'the reason' are a little superfluous here) 2. "Maybe because I had enough swimming in my childhood" 3. "Now I enjoy kicking my feet up more than swimming" ("kicking my feet up" is an expression that means I'm relaxing, lying down, and maybe being a little lazy on purpose)

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