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Dinner Plans
T-chan : How's it going?
Me : I'm doing great. The moment I picked up my iPhone, your message came in.
T-chan : What!? Amazing! Let's go have dinner.
Me : Sure.
T-chan : When do you want to go?
Me : Anytime. It’s up to you, T-chan.
T-chan : How about the 25th?
Me : OK.
T-chan : Let's have a delicious dinner!!
*I actually translated the message we exchanged.
夕食の予定
Tちゃん : 元気？
私 : 元気よ。私がiphoneを持ったと同時にメッセージが来た!
Tちゃん : え～!! なにそれ～すごい。 ご飯食べに行こ!
私 : いいよ
Tちゃん : いつ行く？
私 : いつでもいいよ。Tちゃんに合わせるよ。
Tちゃん : 25はどう？
私 : いいよ。
Tちゃん : 美味しい夕食、食べようぜ!
※実際に来たメッセージを翻訳してみました。
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Dinner Plans
T-chan : How's it going?
T-chan: How's it going?
Me : I'm doing great.
Me: I'm doing great.
The moment I picked up my iPhone, I got your message came in.
The moment I picked up my iPhone, I got your message.
Sentence is correct, but adjusted to a more casual phrase.
T-chan : What!?
T-chan: What!?
Amazing!
Let's go have dinner.
Me : Sure.
Me: Sure.
T-chan : When do you want to go?
T-chan: When do you want to go?
Me : Anytime.
Me: Anytime.
It’s up to you, T-chan.
T-chan : How about the 25th? T-chan : How about the 25th?
Me : OK.
Me: OK.
T-chan : Let's have a delicious dinner!!
T-chan: Let's have a delicious dinner!!
*I actually translated the messages we exchanged. *I actually translated the messages we exchanged.
Feedback
Great job! No corrections, just a minor suggestion for a phrase! Way to go!
today
Thank you for letting me know about how to use the colons. 😀
I thought colons needed spaces both sides.
Actually, I don't need a space before the colon, but I do need one after it.
Dinner Plans
T-chan : How's it going?
Me : I'm doing great.
The moment I picked up my iPhone, your message came in.
T-chan : What!?
Amazing!
Let's go have dinner.
Me : Sure.
T-chan : When do you want to go?
Me : Anytime.
It’s up to you, T-chan.
T-chan : How about the 25th?
Me : OK.
T-chan : Let's have a delicious dinner!!
*I actually translated the messages we exchanged. *I actually translated the messages we exchanged.
You translated multiple messages, so the plural would be needed.
Feedback
You have great control of idiomatic language!
today
Thank you for checking my writing and your message.
I'm glad to hear that. 😀
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