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Titles should have capitals.

Keep an eye out forn contact lenses you wear no matter the eye! Keep an eye on contact lenses you wear!

Keep an eye out for stray contact lenses you wear no matter the eye! Keep an eye out for stray contact lenses!

(tThere will be alternative ways of saying some phrases in brackets, so I hope you'll check them out as well.) (There will be alternative ways of saying some phrases in brackets, so I hope you'll check them out as well.)

This story happened in Birmingham, England in November 2016 (= in November of 2016). This story happened in Birmingham, England in November 2016.

We are going to meet a 67-y.o. woman (= a womam who has 67 years)ear-old woman who had some discomfort in her left eye. We are going to meet a 67-year-old woman who had some discomfort in her left eye.

We are going to meet a 67-y.o. woman (= a womam who has 67 years) who hadA 67-y.o. woman was experiencing some discomfort in her left eye. A 67-y.o. woman was experiencing some discomfort in her left eye.

So she visited a doctor (= she paiyed a visit to a doctor = called on a doctor, meaning physically came). So she visited a doctor (= she payed a visit to a doctor).

At least in my dialect of English, we don't use "called on a doctor". It sounds awkward to me, but I think it's fine in other dialects.

So she visited a doctor (= s. (Or: She paied a visit to a doctor = called on a doctor, meaning physically came).her doctor a visit.) So she visited a doctor. (Or: She paid her doctor a visit.)

She complained that her vision had begun getting worse as well as s. She had been feeling some discomfort in her left eye as well. She complained that her vision had begun getting worse. She had been feeling some discomfort in her left eye as well.

She complained that her vision had begun getting worse, as well as she had been feeling some discomfort in her left eye. She complained that her vision had begun getting worse, as well as feeling some discomfort in her left eye.

As sShe said, it itched and was a little bit dry. She said it itched and was a little bit dry.

As she said, it itched and wasfelt a little bit dry. As she said, it itched and felt a little bit dry.

"was" is okay, but I think "felt" matches better here.

So the, a surgery was assigned (=was scheduled). So, a surgery was scheduled.

So the surgery was assigned (=, she was scheduled) for surgery. So, she was scheduled for surgery.

And she did comeThe woman went to have it done. The woman went to have it done.

And she did comeSome time later, she went in to have it done. Some time later, she went in to have it done.

That was when (= it was in that moment that) the doctor started preparing her for the surgery and discovered something in her eye. That was when the doctor started preparing her for the surgery and discovered something in her eye.

If you want to use your alternative expression, it would have to be "It was at that moment that..."

That was when (= it was in that moment that)When the doctor started preparing her for the surgery and, she discovered something in ther woman's eye. When the doctor started preparing her for surgery, she discovered something in the woman's eye.

This something makes her SCI-title worthy. This something makes her SCI-title worthy.

SCI-title?

This something makes her SCI-title worthyworthy of a Sci-fi novel. This something makes her worthy of a Sci-fi novel.

You may try to guess what was itit was, and you very well may guess the item rightcorrectly. You may try to guess what it was, and you very well may guess correctly.

But, it's unlikely that you'll guess how many items were there. But, it's unlikely that you'll guess how many items were there.

But it's unlikely that you'll guess how many items wthere thwere. But it's unlikely that you'll guess how many items there were.

It wasThere were 27 contact lenses stuck into her left eye (glued to her... = pasted to her...). There were 27 contact lenses stuck to her left eye.

"Stuck in" isn't necessarily wrong since things can get in your eyes, but I feel like I would preferably use "stuck to" in this case since that's how contacts work. The other expressions don't work; they sound too literal.

It wasThere were 27 contact lenses stuck in her left eye (glued to her... = pasted to her...). There were 27 contact lenses stuck in her left eye.

The right eye, however, was free from any of thoshad none. The right eye, however, had none.

The right eye, however, was free from any of thoshad none. The right eye, however, had none.

The doctor removed (= extracted = took off/away = got out) 17 of them that were stuck together, which became in a sort of blue glue-ish mass (= sticky substance = paste-like substance)like mass. The doctor removed (= extracted = got out) 17 of them that were stuck together in a sort of blue glue-like mass.

The doctor removed (= extracted = took off/away = got out) 17 of them that were stuck together, which had becaome a sort of blue glue-ishlike mass (= sticky substance = paste-like substance).. (OR: ...which had become a blue gelatinous mass.) The doctor removed 17 of them that were stuck together, which had become a blue glue-like mass. (OR: ...which had become a blue gelatinous mass.)

glue-like = gelatinous

The other 10 were still glued to the woman’s eye. The other 10 were still glued to the woman’s eye.

I think "glued to" is okay here because you just described some of the lenses as glue-like, and you're emphasizing how stuck on the remaining lenses are.

The doctor had to assign a separate surgery and use special instruments to remove the remaining (= the left 10) 10, though. The doctor had to assign a separate surgery and use special instruments to remove the remaining 10, though.

The doctorwoman had to assignundergo a separate surgery and use, with the doctors using special instruments to remove the remaining (= the left 10) 10, thoughlenses. The woman had to undergo a separate surgery, with the doctors using special instruments to remove the remaining lenses.

TEven so, the woman felt «much better» after the removal, though. Even so, the woman felt much better after the removal.

The woman said she felt «"much better»" after the removal, though. The woman said she felt "much better" after the removal.

Even more soShe felt so much better that she cancelled the surgery, as her left eye did not strainbother her anymore. She felt so much better that she cancelled the surgery, as her left eye did not bother her anymore.

Even more soShe felt so much better that she cancelled ther surgery appointment, as her left eye did not strainhurt anymore. She felt so much better that she cancelled her surgery appointment, as her left eye did not hurt anymore.

As the woman said, she had been wearing monthly disposable contact lenses for 35 years by then and the ones from her left eye were often missing (= were frequentlywent missing). As the woman said, she had been wearing monthly disposable contact lenses for 35 years by then and the ones from her left eye often went missing.

As the woman said, she had been wearing monthly disposable contact lenses for 35 years by then and the ones from her left eye were often missing (= were frequentlywent missing). As the woman said, she had been wearing monthly disposable contact lenses for 35 years and the ones from her left eye often went missing.

That’s why she didn’t take them off6ut. That’s why she didn’t take them out.

That’s why she didn’t take them off6ut. That’s why she didn’t take them out.