Sept. 7, 2020
This is my first day to writing things in english. I would like to improve my writing skill though this method.
I start to listen english podcast and Ted talk every morning. I feel so excited when I decided to start learning different languages. Although english is my secondary languages in my city, I didn't work hard enough when I was young.
And when I grow up now, I feel upset and embarrassed compare to others.
The first day of my eEnglish learning journey
The first day of my English learning journey
This is my first day tof writing things in eEnglish.
This is my first day of writing things in English.
I would like to improve my writing skill through this method.
I would like to improve my writing through this method.
I start toed listen eing to English podcasts and Ted talks every morning.
I started listening to English podcasts and Ted talks every morning.
I feel so excited when I decided to start learning different languages.
I feel excited when I decide to start learning different languages.
Although eEnglish is mythe secondary languages in my city, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young.
Although English is the secondary language in my city, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young.
Or: "Although English is my second language, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young."
And when I grow up nowBut as a grown-up, I feel upset and embarrassed comparewhen I compare myself to others.
But as a grown-up, I feel upset and embarrassed when I compare myself to others.
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Good job!
The first day of my eEnglish learning journey
The first day of my English learning journey
"English" (and other languages) always begin with a capital letter
This is my first day tof writing things in ein English.
This is my first day of writing in English.
I would like to improve my writing skills though this method. I would like to improve my writing skills though this method.
I have started to listen eTo English podcasts and Ted talks every morning.
I have started to listen To English podcasts and Ted talks every morning.
I feel so excited when Iabout decideding to start learning different languages.
I feel so excited about deciding to start learning different languages.
I'm not entirely sure whether you intend to say:
1. Whenever you decide to start learning languages, it makes you excited. (a general statement, about something that happens multiple times)
or
2. At some point you made the decision to start learning languages, and this decisions made you excited.
Although eEnglish is mythe secondary languages in my city, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young.
Although English is the secondary languages in my city, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young.
And when Inow that I am grown up now, I feel upset and embarrassed comparewhen I compare myself to others.
And now that I am grown up, I feel upset and embarrassed when I compare myself to others.
Feedback
Best of luck to you on this journey!
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The first day of my english learning journey
The first day of my "English" (and other languages) always begin with a capital letter
The first day of my |
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This is my first day to writing things in english.
This is my first day
This is my first day |
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I would like to improve my writing skill though this method. I would like to improve my writing skills though this method. I would like to improve my writing skills though this method.
I would like to improve my writing |
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I start to listen english podcast and Ted talk every morning.
I have started to listen
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I feel so excited when I decided to start learning different languages.
I feel so excited I'm not entirely sure whether you intend to say: 1. Whenever you decide to start learning languages, it makes you excited. (a general statement, about something that happens multiple times) or 2. At some point you made the decision to start learning languages, and this decisions made you excited.
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Although english is my secondary languages in my city, I didn't work hard enough when I was young.
Although
Although Or: "Although English is my second language, I didn't work hard enough at it when I was young." |
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And when I grow up now, I feel upset and embarrassed compare to others.
And
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