I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media and towards language learning. I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media and towards language learning.

"and" could also be a comma ",".

I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media and towards language learning. I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media and towards language learning.

I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media and direct it towards language learning. I need to shift my attention away from social media and direct it towards language learning.

At first, people, in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/ instilled since they were very young, were appalled at/by the new law, but later they had a change of heart. At first, people in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/instilled since they were very young were appalled by the new law, but later they had a change of heart.

"since they were very young" could also be replaced with "since childhood"

At first, people, in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/ instilled since very young, were appalled at/by the new law, but later they had a change of heart. At first, people in whom conservative beliefs were instilled since very young, were appalled by the new law, but later they had a change of heart.

At first, people, in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/ instilled since veryat a young age, were appalled at/by the new law, but later they had a change of heart. At first, people, in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/ instilled at a young age, were appalled by the new law, but later they had a change of heart.

Every now and then, a change of scenery is vital to remain on good terms with your family. Every now and then, a change of scenery is vital to remain on good terms with your family.

Every now and then, a change of scenery is vital to remain on good terms with your family. Every now and then, a change of scenery is vital to remain on good terms with your family.

Due to the strict parenting, which is present in Chinese culture, kids have a head start in school and further educational institutions. Due to the strict parenting which is present in Chinese culture, kids have a head start in school and further educational institutions.

Due to the strict parenting, which is present in Chinese culture, kids have a head start in school and further educational institutions. Due to the strict parenting which is present in Chinese culture, kids have a head start in school and further educational institutions.