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June 16, 2022

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summer rain

I was back from the school and leave to home in my pink jacket . I had afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone follow me I run faster and faster but he comes alaways near . My mind is brocken think so and then it rains very strong it was june and i will wet and leave fast to home but it follow me every where and he the shadow stand all the time on my window but then than the rain stop was it away


A shadow is more at only light

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I was back from the school and leave to home in my pink jacket .


I was back from the school, and leave tI left to go home in my pink jacket . I was back from school, and I left to go home in my pink jacket .

I'm kind of unsure of what you are trying to say. I changed "leave" to the past tense "left".

I was back from the school and leave tft to go home in my pink jacket . I was back from school and left to go home in my pink jacket .

Used past tense for to leave which is left

I had afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone follow me I run faster and faster but he comes alaways near .


I hadwas afraid , and I know this is crazy, but iI think someone was following me. I ruan faster and faster, but he comes alaways near kept getting closer. I was afraid, and I know this is crazy, but I think someone was following me. I ran faster and faster, but he kept getting closer.

The verbs needed to be in the past tense.

I hadwas afraid and I know this is crazy, but iI thinkought someone was following me. I ruan faster and faster but he comes alaways near catching up to me. I was afraid and I know this is crazy, but I thought someone was following me. I ran faster and faster but he was catching up to me.

More past tense changes. I used a phrase, "to catch up to" means to get nearer to someone. This is often used in regard to a race or chase.

My mind is brocken think so and then it rains very strong it was june and i will wet and leave fast to home but it follow me every where and he the shadow stand all the time on my window but then than the rain stop was it away


My mind is brocken think so and tcan't think. Then it rains very strong i. It was jJune and i will. I was wet, and leaveI left fast to go home, but it followed me every where and he t. The shadow stand all the time onkept standing at my window, but then than the rain stop was iped and it went away. My mind can't think. Then it rains very strong. It was June. I was wet, and I left fast to go home, but it followed me everywhere. The shadow kept standing at my window, but then the rain stopped and it went away.

I changed the verbs to the past tense. I also put some punctuation marks where I thought you could start a new sentence.

MI think my mind is brocken think so, and then it rainsed very strong ily. It was jJune and iI willas wet and leaveft fast to go home but it followed me every where and he. He, the shadow, stand all the time onood endlessly by my window, but then than the rain stop wasped, it aways gone. I think my mind is broken, and then it rained very strongly. It was June and I was wet and left fast to go home but it followed me everywhere. He, the shadow, stood endlessly by my window, but then than the rain stopped, it was gone.

I´m not sure what you meant here, so I hope my corrections make sense. I used the word "endlessly" to help clear up that part of the sentence, but it also adds to the mood.

A shadow is more at only light


A shadow is more at only light A shadow is more at only light

Unsure what this means.

A shadow is more at onlyade stronger by the light A shadow is made stronger by the light

I hope this is what you meant.

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