May 24, 2026
今天是星期天,我做的第一件事就是睡懒觉。 天气很热——五月中旬的天气实在太热了。气温徘徊在30度左右。 最近,我尽量控制饮食,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间很少。 不过今天,我要去游泳。我真的需要锻炼一下。 游完泳之后感觉放松多了。
星期天
今天是星期天,我做的第一件事就是睡懒觉。
天气很热——五月中旬的天气实在太热了。
气温徘徊在30度左右。
最近,我尽量控制饮食,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间很少。
不过今天,我要去游泳。
我真的需要锻炼一下。
游完泳之后感觉放松多了。
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满分。
星期天
今天是星期天,我做的第一件事就是睡懒觉。
天气很热——五月中旬的天气实在太热了。
气温徘徊在30度左右。
气温在30度左右。
最近,我尽量控制饮食,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间很少。
不过今天,我要去游泳。
我真的需要锻炼一下。
游完泳之后感觉放松多了。
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写得非常好😊
星期天
今天是星期天,我做的第一件事就是睡懒觉。
天气很热——五月中旬的天气实在太热了。
气温徘徊在30度左右。
最近,我尽量控制饮食,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间很少减少,我便尽量控制饮食。
最近,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间减少,我便尽量控制饮食。
Your sentence is grammatically correct and logical.
Small polish for more natural expression:
I’ve cut down on exercise due to heavy work, so I’m trying to control my diet.This is correct order in your sentence I guess.
不过今天,我要去游泳。
我真的需要锻炼一下。
游完泳之后感觉放松多了。
Feedback
Pay attention to the cause and effect. Your other sentences are perfectly written!:)
星期天
今天是星期天,我做的第一件事就是睡懒觉。
天气很热——五月中旬的德国天气实在太热了。 天气很热——五月中旬的德国天气实在太热了。
气温徘徊在30度左右。
最近,我尽量控制饮食,因为工作繁忙,锻炼的时间很少。
不过今天,我要去游泳。
我真的需要锻炼一下。
游完泳之后感觉放松多了。
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德国家庭很少安装空调对吗?
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