Day fFive: My life in Cyprus - pPart tTwo Day Five: My life in Cyprus - Part Two

My co-workers are from different countries, and at work, we use English to communicate with each other. My coworkers are from different countries, and at work, we use English to communicate with each other.

No need to hyphenate coworkers. Be aware of comma usages (between two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction, after a prepositional phrase, etc)

My co-workers are all from different countries, and at work, we use English to communicate with each other. My co-workers are all from different countries, and at work, we use English to communicate with each other.

Most of my workmates who live in Cyprus speak Russian, so even when we hang out, we talk in our native language. Most of my workmates who live in Cyprus speak Russian, so even when we hang out, we talk in our native language.

Most of my workmates who live in Cyprus speak Russian, so even when we hang out we talk in our native language. Most of my workmates who live in Cyprus speak Russian, so even when we hang out we talk in our native language.

If my company had obliged aus to work at thein office, I would behave been able to become friends with 3three local colleagues. If my company had obliged us to work in office, I would have been able to become friends with three local colleagues.

unlikely situation: If ... past perfect, ... past conditional https://libguides.hull.ac.uk/writing/numbers#:~:text=Basic%20numbers,use%20words%20rather%20than%20numerals.

If my company obligrequired aus to work at the office, I would be able to become friends with 3 local colleagues. If my company required us to work at the office, I would be able to become friends with 3 local colleagues.

I could gethave gotten both English and Greek practice and discover many new places to hang out. I could have gotten both English and Greek practice and discover many new places to hang out.

I could getpractice both English and Greek practice and discover many new places to hang out. I could practice both English and Greek and discover many new places to hang out.

ButHowever, since visiting the office isn't necessary, so many people prefer to work at home. However, since visiting the office isn't necessary, so many people prefer to work at home.

never start a sentence with "but"

I'm not a morning person, so I don't like to wake up early, and the way/commute to work pisses me off. I'm not a morning person, so I don't like to wake up early, and the way/commute to work pisses me off.

I'm not a morning person. I don't like to wake up early and the way to workraditional work life pisses me off. I'm not a morning person. I don't like to wake up early and traditional work life pisses me off.

"Pisses me off" is really strong, and not professional. It's a little crass and informal. For writing about work, maybe use "really annoys me" or "gets on my nerves" instead.

For that reason, my live communicationTherefore/Consequently, my live practice in any language is quite limited. Therefore/Consequently, my live practice in any language is quite limited.

For that reason, my livface-to-face communication in any language is quite limited. For that reason, my face-to-face communication in any language is quite limited.

Once, I realized that I dihadn't sayid a word for 3 days. Once, I realized that I hadn't said a word for 3 days.

I do meet with workmates, but they are married and have kids, so if they go out, it is rare and wouldn't be long. I do meet with workmates, but they are married and have kids, so if they go out, it is rare and wouldn't be long.

Conditional tense here, not future

I do meet with workmates, but they are married and have kids so if they go out it is rare and wthey don't bestay long. I do meet with workmates, but they are married and have kids so if they go out it is rare and they don't stay long.

It's completely true that after marriage, people disappear. It's completely true that after marriage, people disappear.

It's completely true twhat people say: after marriage people disappear. It's completely true what people say: after marriage people disappear.

Or just "After marriage people disappear."

Once, I was in a [decade] horrible mood after a hard week, so when a colleague wrote in a group chat offering to go to a bar in the evening, I agreed. Once, I was in a [decade] horrible mood after a hard week, so when a colleague wrote in a group chat offering to go to a bar in the evening, I agreed.

decade = 10 years you cannot be in a "decade" mood, and I can't guess which adjective you were trying to use :(

Once, I was in a decade(bad? sad?) mood after a hard week, so when a colleague wrote in a group chat offering to go to a bar in thethat evening, I agreed. Once, I was in a (bad? sad?) mood after a hard week, so when a colleague wrote in a group chat offering to go to a bar that evening, I agreed.

Decade doesn't make sense here.

I'm not a fan of alcohol, so I thought one or two cocktails would be enough. I'm not a fan of alcohol, so I thought one or two cocktails would be enough.

ButNonetheless, it appearsed that I started to enjoy the evening and, the cocktails, and the company. Nonetheless, it appeared that I started to enjoy the evening, the cocktails, and the company.

past tense

But it appearI guess that I started to enjoy the evening and cocktails and company. But I guess that I started to enjoy the evening and cocktails and company.

It appears is more for what you see / notice, not what you do.

I was about suggest to drinking all night when after a few hours and two or three cocktails, one of them said, "Well, asking for athe bill and going home?". I was about suggest drinking all night when after a few hours and two or three cocktails, one of them said, "Well, asking for the bill and going home?"

to + infinitive gerund (-ing tense) never goes with a "to" asking for "the" bill because it's not ANY bill no punctuation after quote

I was about to suggest to drinking all night, when after a few hours, and two or three cocktails, one of them said "Well, should we asking for athe bill and (going / head) home?". I was about to suggest drinking all night, when after a few hours, and two or three cocktails, one of them said "Well, should we ask for the bill and (go / head) home?".

I was disappointed, but there wasn't muchany choice. I was disappointed, but there wasn't any choice.

much works too but any is better

I was disappointed but there wasn't muchI didn't have much (of a) choice. I was disappointed but I didn't have much (of a) choice.

To be honest, there is only one [active] and lonely female we spend most of our weekends togetherwoman with whom I spend most of my time during the weekends. To be honest, there is only one [active] and lonely woman with whom I spend most of my time during the weekends.

Here the "we" is not clear because I'm not sure if you're referring to your company friends, or you and the woman also, don't refer to women as "females" What is an "active" female?

To be honest, there is only one active and lonely femalewoman (in my office) who enjoys going out a lot, so we spend most of our weekends together. To be honest, there is only one woman (in my office) who enjoys going out a lot, so we spend most of our weekends together.

Female is usually kind of derogatory. Try woman instead.

Usually, we have breakfast somewhere in the city center, thenfollowed by some shopping or mindless strolling around mindlessly. Usually, we have breakfast somewhere in the city center, followed by some shopping or mindless strolling.

parallelism