Oct. 13, 2020
MC
今天不知道可以寫什麼。
下個禮拜MC要到了。
所以，我今天吃太多…
不舒服。
I'm not sure what to write today.
My MC should come next week.
So, I ate way too much today...
I feel so uncomfortable.
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下個禮拜MC大姨媽要到了。
下個禮拜大姨媽要到了。
In Taiwan, MC is also called 大姨媽.
所以，但是我今天吃太多…
但是我今天吃太多…
reason + So ~
"MC is coming so I ate too much" is a bit weird.
但是 = but
MC is coming but I ate too much (I should not eat too much indeed).
所以不舒服。 所以不舒服。
Oct. 16, 2020
謝謝你^^
我今天不知道可以寫什麼写日记无从下笔。
我今天写日记无从下笔。
you can learn new vocabulary.
无从下笔。
the original one is correct. I hope you can learn some a new word
下個禮拜, 我的MC要到了。 下個禮拜, 我的MC要到了。
[time] + [comma]+[ thing].
EX in English
today, I cook.
所以，因为我今天吃太多…的很多。
因为我今天吃的很多。
don't relate to the last part.
My period is coming in next week. so, I ate a lot today.
don't make sense.
所以，我的肚子不舒服。 所以，我的肚子不舒服。
To relate the last second sentence, I add "because" ....then [the consequence]
because I ate a lot today. So my stomach doesn't feel comfortable
Feedback
if you have any questions, welcome to ask me.
just lock logic. it much better than your first writing.
Oct. 13, 2020
MC ?
Oct. 14, 2020
@Linda: do you correct it to be academically correct, or more like daily use?
I just ask because of the grammar.
My Taiwanese friends don't use commas after time.
Ex: 下禮拜一Amy換15:00上課。
這樣。
@Alex: MC是那個女生每月有的。在台灣就是說MC，所以我不知道what it is in Chinese characters.
Oct. 14, 2020
所以，因为我今天吃太多…的很多。
don't relate to the last part.
My period is coming in next week. so, I ate a lot today.
don't make sense.
Because I have PMDD so the week before my MC, I suffer depression, anxiety, etc. I will feel sad and bored even if I have lots of energy, and I will feel like I want to eat nonstop, even though I usually only eat twice a day (intermittent fasting).
Oct. 17, 2020
@Linda: do you correct it to be academically correct, or more like daily use? I just ask because of the grammar. My Taiwanese friends don't use commas after time. Ex: 下禮拜一Amy換15:00上課。 這樣。 @Alex: MC是那個女生每月有的。在台灣就是說MC，所以我不知道what it is in Chinese characters.
maybe daily use,
I am not sure about this one. maybe you can ask Jack. adding a comma will better. in my elementary textbook, they used to add a comma. but the whole sentence doesn't make a big effect.
Oct. 17, 2020
Because I have PMDD so the week before my MC, I suffer depression, anxiety, etc. I will feel sad and bored even if I have lots of energy, and I will feel like I want to eat nonstop, even though I usually only eat twice a day (intermittent fasting).
I am sorry to hear that. but this information is personal issues. as same as MC , this word, people don't catch up if they have less known.
MC What’s the MC? MC What’s the MC?
今天不知道可以寫什麼。
今天不知道寫什麼。
所以，我今天吃了太多… 所以，我今天吃了太多…
MC與吃東西有什麼關聯嗎？
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關鍵是我不知道MV是什麼，所以不知道怎麼改。
Oct. 13, 2020
你用繁體字寫的短文網站不給我推送，你寫好後可以發給我。
Oct. 13, 2020
哈哈哈
謝謝你，傑克^^
MC是台灣人說的
是“menstruation cycle", 那個女生每月有的問題。在英文說“period”。
有沒有加我是你的朋友？如果加我，你可以有notification^^
Oct. 13, 2020
Sorry for my questions, I feel very embarrassed. I just added you.
Oct. 13, 2020
哈哈哈 it's no problem!!
I don't know about China, but in Taiwan men are all comfortable with hearing girls talk about their MC.
Some even help their moms and sisters buy products necessary for that time.
MC
今天不知道可以寫什麼。
下個禮拜我MC要到來了。
下個禮拜我MC要來了。
I think 來 (come) is the most colloquial verb.
所以，但是因為我今天吃太多…
但是因為我今天吃太多…
所以肚子不舒服。 所以肚子不舒服。
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我今天 you can learn new vocabulary. 无从下笔。 the original one is correct. I hope you can learn some a new word |
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下個禮拜MC要到了。
下個禮拜我MC要 I think 來 (come) is the most colloquial verb. 下個禮拜, 我的MC要到了。 下個禮拜, 我的MC要到了。 [time] + [comma]+[ thing]. EX in English today, I cook.
下個禮拜
下個禮拜 In Taiwan, MC is also called 大姨媽. |
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所以，我今天吃太多…
所以，我今天吃了太多… 所以，我今天吃了太多… MC與吃東西有什麼關聯嗎？
don't relate to the last part. My period is coming in next week. so, I ate a lot today. don't make sense.
因為～～所以～～
reason + So ~ "MC is coming so I ate too much" is a bit weird. 但是 = but MC is coming but I ate too much (I should not eat too much indeed). |
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不舒服。 所以肚子不舒服。 所以肚子不舒服。 所以，我的肚子不舒服。 所以，我的肚子不舒服。 To relate the last second sentence, I add "because" ....then [the consequence] because I ate a lot today. So my stomach doesn't feel comfortable 所以不舒服。 所以不舒服。 |
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