Oct. 17, 2022
Q: What have you been doing today ?
A: I prepared for the meeting materials. First, I listed up what I need. Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials. Finally, I arranged the meeting with person whom may I concerned. That's I did in the morning.
Q: 今日は何をしていたんですか?
A:会議資料の準備をしました。まず、必要なものをリストアップしました。そして、共有フォルダで関連資料をざっと探しました。最後に、関係者と打ち合わせをしました。これが午前中の作業です。
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Q: What have you been doing today ?
A: I prepared for the meeting materials.
or
I prepared the material for the meeting.
First, I listed up what I needed.
Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials(s).
Finally, I arranged thea meeting with the person whom may Iit concerned.
That's what I did in the morning.
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A: I prepared materials for thea meeting materials.
Unless person Q already knows about the meeting, you have to use 'a' and not 'the'.
First, I listed upout what I needed.
you:
list out
but you:
write down
unless it's a long document and then you:
write up
Fun isn't it?
Finally, I arranged a time for the meeting with the person whom may I concerned I am presenting to.
I speak and write American English and we almost never use `whom`, instead we usually use `who` unless it is a formal situation.
That's what I did in the morning.
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I would be careful about writing out synthetic dialogs like this, even when native speakers try to write them they are never natural sounding.
First, I listed up what I needed.
No need for 'up', here, because 'listed' is not a phrasal verb. 'Need' should be in the past tense, like the other verbs in your writing.
Finally, I arranged the meetinga time with the person whom may I concerned I am going to meet.
Use 'a time' here to avoid repetition, i.e. .so you don't have two 'meet' words in the same sentence (sylistic).
'To whom it is concerned' is a way to start an email or letter, but not really something we change or use in other ways in writing. Instead, use a defining relative clause with 'who' to specify or identify the person you are talking about (i.e. Q: Who did you arrange the time with? A: The person [who] I am going to meet).
That's what I did in the morning.
Think about the original question: 'What did you do in the morning?' Here, you are repeating ('reporting') the original question, so use 'what' as it appeared in that question.
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Q: What have you been doing today ? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A: I prepared for the meeting materials. A: I prepared materials for Unless person Q already knows about the meeting, you have to use 'a' and not 'the'. A: I prepared or I prepared the material for the meeting. |
First, I listed up what I need. First, I listed No need for 'up', here, because 'listed' is not a phrasal verb. 'Need' should be in the past tense, like the other verbs in your writing. First, I listed you: list out but you: write down unless it's a long document and then you: write up Fun isn't it? First, I listed |
Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials. Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related material |
Finally, I arranged the meeting with person whom may I concerned. Finally, I arranged Use 'a time' here to avoid repetition, i.e. .so you don't have two 'meet' words in the same sentence (sylistic). 'To whom it is concerned' is a way to start an email or letter, but not really something we change or use in other ways in writing. Instead, use a defining relative clause with 'who' to specify or identify the person you are talking about (i.e. Q: Who did you arrange the time with? A: The person [who] I am going to meet). Finally, I arranged a time for the meeting with the person who I speak and write American English and we almost never use `whom`, instead we usually use `who` unless it is a formal situation. Finally, I arranged |
That's I did in the morning. That's what I did in the morning. Think about the original question: 'What did you do in the morning?' Here, you are repeating ('reporting') the original question, so use 'what' as it appeared in that question. That's what I did in the morning. That's what I did in the morning. |
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