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haribop5738

Oct. 17, 2022

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Q: What have you been doing today ?

A: I prepared for the meeting materials. First, I listed up what I need. Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials. Finally, I arranged the meeting with person whom may I concerned. That's I did in the morning.


Q: 今日は何をしていたんですか?

A:会議資料の準備をしました。まず、必要なものをリストアップしました。そして、共有フォルダで関連資料をざっと探しました。最後に、関係者と打ち合わせをしました。これが午前中の作業です。

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Q: What have you been doing today ?

A: I prepared for the meeting materials.

or

I prepared the material for the meeting.

First, I listed up what I needed.

Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials(s).

Finally, I arranged thea meeting with the person whom may Iit concerned.

That's what I did in the morning.

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よく出来ました!

A: I prepared materials for thea meeting materials.

Unless person Q already knows about the meeting, you have to use 'a' and not 'the'.

First, I listed upout what I needed.

you:
list out

but you:
write down

unless it's a long document and then you:
write up

Fun isn't it?

Finally, I arranged a time for the meeting with the person whom may I concerned I am presenting to.

I speak and write American English and we almost never use `whom`, instead we usually use `who` unless it is a formal situation.

That's what I did in the morning.

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I would be careful about writing out synthetic dialogs like this, even when native speakers try to write them they are never natural sounding.

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haribop5738

Oct. 18, 2022

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Thank you for your informative feedback. I will continue to study English.

First, I listed up what I needed.

No need for 'up', here, because 'listed' is not a phrasal verb. 'Need' should be in the past tense, like the other verbs in your writing.

Finally, I arranged the meetinga time with the person whom may I concerned I am going to meet.

Use 'a time' here to avoid repetition, i.e. .so you don't have two 'meet' words in the same sentence (sylistic).
'To whom it is concerned' is a way to start an email or letter, but not really something we change or use in other ways in writing. Instead, use a defining relative clause with 'who' to specify or identify the person you are talking about (i.e. Q: Who did you arrange the time with? A: The person [who] I am going to meet).

That's what I did in the morning.

Think about the original question: 'What did you do in the morning?' Here, you are repeating ('reporting') the original question, so use 'what' as it appeared in that question.

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Q: What have you been doing today ?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I prepared for the meeting materials.


A: I prepared materials for thea meeting materials.

Unless person Q already knows about the meeting, you have to use 'a' and not 'the'.

A: I prepared for the meeting materials.

or I prepared the material for the meeting.

First, I listed up what I need.


First, I listed up what I needed.

No need for 'up', here, because 'listed' is not a phrasal verb. 'Need' should be in the past tense, like the other verbs in your writing.

First, I listed upout what I needed.

you: list out but you: write down unless it's a long document and then you: write up Fun isn't it?

First, I listed up what I needed.

Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials.


Then, I did a quick search in the shared folder for related materials(s).

Finally, I arranged the meeting with person whom may I concerned.


Finally, I arranged the meetinga time with the person whom may I concerned I am going to meet.

Use 'a time' here to avoid repetition, i.e. .so you don't have two 'meet' words in the same sentence (sylistic). 'To whom it is concerned' is a way to start an email or letter, but not really something we change or use in other ways in writing. Instead, use a defining relative clause with 'who' to specify or identify the person you are talking about (i.e. Q: Who did you arrange the time with? A: The person [who] I am going to meet).

Finally, I arranged a time for the meeting with the person whom may I concerned I am presenting to.

I speak and write American English and we almost never use `whom`, instead we usually use `who` unless it is a formal situation.

Finally, I arranged thea meeting with the person whom may Iit concerned.

That's I did in the morning.


That's what I did in the morning.

Think about the original question: 'What did you do in the morning?' Here, you are repeating ('reporting') the original question, so use 'what' as it appeared in that question.

That's what I did in the morning.

That's what I did in the morning.

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