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Nov. 27, 2020

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Journal 11/27/20

This afternoon, when I was after work, it was already dark outside. Because in our region, during this season, sunset time is 5. Then I rode my bicycle downtown. Afterwards, I rode my bicycle to my mom’s house. The whole trip was 10 kilometers long. I feel a little bit tired now, so I lay on the bed and wrote this passage. I hope it is written well, and it doesn’t have any mistakes.

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Then I rode my bicycle downtown.

Afterwards, I rode my bicycle to my mom’s house.

The whole trip was 10 kilometers long.

I hope it is written well, and it doesn’t have any mistakes.

I hope it is written well, and it doesn’t have any mistakes.

Journal 11/27/20


This afternoon, when I was after work, it was already dark outside.


This afternoon, when I was after work after work, it was already dark outside. After I finished work in the afternoon, it was already dark outside. This afternoon after work, it was already dark outside. After I finished work in the afternoon, it was already dark outside.

This afternoon, when I was aftergot off work, it was already dark outside. This afternoon, when I got off work, it was already dark outside.

Because in our region, during this season, sunset time is 5.


Because inof our region, during this season, sunset time isis at 5. Because of our region, during this season, sunset is at 5.

Because inof our region, during this season, the sunset time is 5 pm. Because of our region, during this season, the sunset time is 5 pm.

Then I rode my bicycle downtown.


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Afterwards, I rode my bicycle to my mom’s house.


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The whole trip was 10 kilometers long.


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I feel a little bit tired now, so I lay on the bed and wrote this passage.


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I hope it is written well, and it doesn’t have any mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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