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I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called my dream or not. I like reading books, and sometimes I want to become a writer. Now, I am an engineer and a project manager. When I worked on a Project, I wrote some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it (of course, in working, that is a planning skill or estimating a problem skill). I like to see everything that occurs around me and note it in my blog. By the way, writing stories makes me feel I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does.

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I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called my dream or not.

I like reading books, and sometimes I want to become a writer.

Now, I am an engineer and a project manager.

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May 13, 2025

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I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called my dream or not.

I like reading books, and sometimes I want to become a writer.

Now, I am an engineer and a project manager.

I like to see everything that occurs around me and note it in my blog.

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May 13, 2025

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Become To Writer


To Become Toa Writer To Become a Writer

Alternatively: "Becoming a Writer".

Become Toing a Writer Becoming a Writer

Become Toing a Writer Becoming a Writer

"Become to Writer" is grammatically incorrect. The correct expression is "Becoming a Writer," which indicates the process or aspiration of becoming a writer. The infinitive form "to become" doesn't fit here, and "Becoming" is a better choice to reflect the ongoing or desired process.

I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called my dream or not.


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I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called mya dream or not. I'm not sure if what I'm about to tell you next can be called a dream or not.

"Dream" is an uncountable noun in this context, so you don’t need "my" here. It sounds more natural as "a dream" instead of "my dream."

I like reading books, and sometimes I want to become a writer.


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I like reading books, and sometimes I want to become a writer. I like reading books, and sometimes I want to be a writer.

"Become a writer" is understandable, but the more natural expression is "be a writer." "Become" is often used in the context of gradual transformation, and "be" is the better fit when stating a career goal.

Now, I am an engineer and a project manager.


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NowCurrently, I am an engineer and a project manager. Currently, I am an engineer and a project manager.

"Now" is okay but "currently" sounds more natural when talking about your present occupation. It indicates your current status and is often used in formal writing.

When I worked on a Project, I wrote some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it (of course, in working, that is a planning skill or estimating a problem skill).


Whilen I worked on a Pproject, I wrote some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it (of course, in working, that is a planning skill or estimating a problem skill). While I worked on a project, I wrote some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it (of course, in working, that is a planning skill or estimating a problem skill).

When I worked on a Pproject, I wroteite out some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve ithem. (oOf course, in this line of working, that is a's called planning skills or estimating a problemproblem estimation skills.). When I work on a project, I write out some possibilities and imagine what would happen, and how I would resolve them. (Of course, in this line of work, that's called planning skills or problem estimation skills.)

(1) "worked", "wrote", "imagined" should all be in the present tense, since this is presumably still what you do regularly, given you're still a project manager. (2) It should be "them" instead of "it", since "possibilities" is plural. (3) What you wrote in the parentheses is a whole sentence by itself, and should be written as such. (Yes, you can put parentheses around whole sentences!)

When I worked on a Pproject, I wrote out some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it. (oOf course, in working, that is anvolves planning skills or estimating a problemproblem-solving skills.). When I worked on a project, I wrote out some possibilities and imagined what would happen, and how I would resolve it. (Of course, in work, that involves planning skills or problem-solving skills.)

"Project" doesn't need to be capitalized unless it’s a title or a specific name. "Wrote some possibilities" is fine, but "wrote out" is more natural. Also, "in working" should be changed to "in work," and the phrase "planning skill or estimating a problem skill" should be improved to "planning skills or problem-solving skills" for clarity and natural flow.

I like to see everything that occurs around me and note it in my blog.


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I like to see everything that occurs around me and note it in my blog. I like to see everything that occurs around me and note it in my blog.

"see" is okay, but consider "observe".

I like to seobserve everything that occurhappens around me and note it in my blog. I like to observe everything that happens around me and note it in my blog.

"See everything that occurs" sounds a bit awkward. "Observe" is a better verb choice when talking about paying attention to things around you. "Happens" is a more natural verb than "occurs" in this context.

By the way, writing stories makes me feel I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does.


By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does. By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does.

By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never dosees. By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never sees.

Here, "strange things...that the real world never sees" refers to strange things that never occur in the real world (and hence nobody ever "sees").

By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does. By the way, writing stories makes me feel like I am living in another world, with strange things happening that the real world never does.

"Feel like" is the correct structure when talking about emotions or sensations, so "feel like I am" is more natural than "feel I am."

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