Dec. 15, 2021
FINANCIAL MODELING APP
The easiest solution to obtain financial models quickly and accurately
No expertise in finance or accounting required.
No extensive documentation to read.
No complex user interfaces to learn.
Clear and accurate results.
Create financial models in an intuitive way.
Setting up a model, and making updates in few minutes.
Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc.
Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead automatically.
See the overall progress of your business forecast in charts.
Compare your performance with industry-specific benchmarks
Correction Settings
Setting up a model, and makinge updates in few minutes.
Set up a model, and make updates in few minutes.
Or: Set up a model, and begin making updates in few minutes.
Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc. Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc.
It is a bit redundant to say both "such as" and ", etc.", but people do write in that way, so it's not unusual.
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Stylistic comment:
The first ones are not full sentences, and then you have some that are.
I think it might feel a bit smoother if either they were all sentences, or none, but I'm not sure.
Feb. 2, 2022
Which ones are incorrect?
Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead, automatically. Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead, automatically.
The comma after the word "ahead" makes the sentence clear.
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FINANCIAL MODELING APP |
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The easiest solution to obtain financial models quickly and accurately |
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No expertise in finance or accounting required. |
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No extensive documentation to read. |
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No complex user interfaces to learn. |
|
Clear and accurate results. |
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Create financial models in an intuitive way. |
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Setting up a model, and making updates in few minutes.
Set Or: Set up a model, and begin making updates in few minutes. |
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Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc. Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc. Use Delfos with any kind of revenue in your business, such as: recurring, per hour, per unit, etc. It is a bit redundant to say both "such as" and ", etc.", but people do write in that way, so it's not unusual. |
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Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead automatically. Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead, automatically. Anticipate potential cash shortages and funding requirements months ahead, automatically. The comma after the word "ahead" makes the sentence clear. |
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See the overall progress of your business forecast in charts. |
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Compare your performance with industry-specific benchmarks |
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