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My routine is to walk to the foot of the mountain.
I go hiking alone, without inviting anyone or taking photos.
I just want to quietly enjoy hiking.
Because the scenery doesn't matter, what matters is perseverance.
As long as you keep exercising, your leg muscles will become stronger.
I carry a bottle of water in my backpack.
At the top of the mountain, a bottle of water will be emptied.
我的日常线路是走到山脚下。
我独自登山,不约人,不拍照。
我只想安安静静享受登山。
因为风景不重要,重要的是持之以恒。
只要你坚持锻炼,腿部肌肉就更加结实。
我的背包里带了一瓶水。
到了山顶,这瓶水就被喝光。
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My routine is to walk to the foot of the mountain.
I go hiking alone, without inviting anyone or taking any photos.
More readable this way
I just want to quietly enjoy hiking.
Because the scenery doesn't matter, what matters is perseveranceperseverance is very important.
I think this reads better.
As long as you keep exercising, your leg muscles will become stronger.
I carry a bottle of water in my backpack.
At the top of the mountain, athe bottle of water will be emptied.
The is probably more appropriate here as it follows on from referencing the water bottle in the previous sentence
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My routine is to walk to the foot of the mountain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I go hiking alone, without inviting anyone or taking photos. I go hiking alone, without inviting anyone or taking any photos. More readable this way |
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I just want to quietly enjoy hiking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because the scenery doesn't matter, what matters is perseverance. Because the scenery doesn't matter, I think this reads better. |
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As long as you keep exercising, your leg muscles will become stronger. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I carry a bottle of water in my backpack. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the top of the mountain, a bottle of water will be emptied. At the top of the mountain, The is probably more appropriate here as it follows on from referencing the water bottle in the previous sentence |
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