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Jack

Sept. 11, 2022

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Waist Pain

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpot to cook soybeans.

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

At that moment, the stewpot was on the floor. To see the control panel, I had to squat. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posture. If I changed my posture a little, my waist would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.

Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom. There were three steps to the whole process.

Firstly, I had to sit on the bed. Secondly, I had to stand up. Thirdly, I had to walk.

To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful. The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a special posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

I had waist pain two times before. The first time took place in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020. I did the medical check, but there was no waist bone injury.

Now, I am lying down on my bed. I think the treatment might be only to have a while of rest.

It's really strange. It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerted.

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Sept. 12, 2022

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I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

There were three steps to the whole process.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

Now, I am lying down on my bed.

It's really strange.

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Jack

Sept. 14, 2022

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Waist Pain

To see the control panel, I had to squat.

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom.

There were three steps to the whole process.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

Now, I am lying down on my bed.

It's really strange.

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2022

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2022

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Thirdly, I had to walk.


Thirdly, I had to walk. Third, I had to walk.

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Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom.


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There were three steps to the whole process.


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Firstly, I had to sit on the bed.


Firstly, I had to get up to sit on the bed. First, I had to get up to sit on the bed.

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Firstly, I had to sit on the bed. First, I had to sit on the bed.

Secondly, I had to stand up.


Secondly, I had to stand up. Second, I had to stand up.

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Waist Pain


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Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpot to cook soybeans.


Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Cceramic Eelectric Stewpotslowcooker to cook soybeans. Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a ceramic electric slowcooker to cook soybeans.

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Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpotn electric Dutch oven to cook soybeans. Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use an electric Dutch oven to cook soybeans.

From pictures online, this is what I could call a Dutch oven. Perhaps even a slow cooker? You can have a look too to see if that fits :)

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.


ThaIt was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it. It was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

Thatis was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it. This was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it yet. That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it yet.

At that moment, the stewpot was on the floor.


At that moment, the stewpotlowcooker was on the floor. At that moment, the slowcooker was on the floor.

At that moment, the stewpot waslanded on the floor. At that moment, the stewpot landed on the floor.

At that momenWhile she tried to figure it out, the stewpot was on the floor. While she tried to figure it out, the stewpot was on the floor.

To see the control panel, I had to squat.


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To see the control panel, I had to squat down. To see the control panel, I had to squat down.

To see the control panel, I had to squat on the ground. To see the control panel, I had to squat on the ground.

Yours is correct - this is just more natural sounding

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.


After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe painI had a severe pain at my waist and I almost fell. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, I had a severe pain at my waist and I almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but, suddenly, my waist had severe painI felt severe pain in my waist and I almost fell. After I did that, I started to stand up but, suddenly, I felt severe pain in my waist and almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist hadI had a severe pain in my ribs and I almost fell down. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, I had a severe pain in my ribs and almost fell down.

We don't usually say "waist" for pain. Perhaps ribs, maybe stomach or chest, or if it's more general and on the side, you could say "pain in my side".

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.


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After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.


After I lay down on my bed, I could only stalie only in one postureition. After I lay down on my bed, I could lie only in one position.

Nice use of the word, "lay." or After I lay down on my bed, I could lie in one position only. or After I lay down on my bed, I only could lie in one position.

After I lay downrested on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.ition. After I rested on my bed, I could only stay in one position.

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posturn't move. After I lay down on my bed, I couldn't move.

If I changed my posture a little, my waist would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.


If I changed my postureition even a little bit, my waist would hurt severely hurt again and I would get sweaty. If I changed my position even a little bit, my waist would severely hurt again and I would sweat.

Wow, this sounds really bad!

If I changed my posture a little, my waistside/ribs would hurt severely and I would get sweaty. If I changed my posture a little, my side/ribs would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.

To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.


To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable postureition which was less painful. To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable position which was less painful.

To achieveFor each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful. For each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.


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When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a special posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.


When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keepmaintain a specialfic postureition because , otherwise, I couldn't even stand. When I walked to the bathroom, I had to maintain a specific position because , otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a specialfic posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand. When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a specific posture, otherwise I couldn't even stand.

I had waist pain two times before.


I've had waist pain two times before. I've had waist pain two times before.

I had wave had thist pain two times before. I have had this pain two times before.

The first time took place in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020.


The first time took placeoccurred in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020. The first time occurred in about 2015, the second in 2020.

I did the medical check, but there was no waist bone injury.


I did the medical check, but there waswent to the Doctor's, but no waist bone injury could be found. I went to the Doctor's, but no waist injury could be found.

We don't ever use the term, "waist bone," in the US.

I did the medical checkhad a doctor check it out, but there was no waist bonerib injury. I had a doctor check it out, but there was no rib injury.

The bones around your waist would be "ribs".

Now, I am lying down on my bed.


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I think the treatment might be only to have a while of rest.


I think the treatment might be only to have a whileperiod of rest. I think the treatment might be only to have a period of rest.

I think the treatment might be only to havejust resting for a while of rest. I think the treatment might be just resting for awhile.

I think the treatment might be only to have a while ofjust to rest. I think the treatment might be just to rest.

It's really strange.


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It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerted.


It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerteding myself. It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerting myself.

It suddenly hurt for no reason, butecause, when I stood up, I wasdid not overexerted myself. It suddenly hurt for no reason because, when I stood up, I did not overexert myself.

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