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Beijing is the capital of China, also one of four first-tier cities in China.

The transport system in Beijing is very convenient. Subways and public bikes are everywhere. Food there, I think, is also acceptable-expensive ones and cheap ones are all offered. But the accommodation fee is very expensive. For example, if a standard room in my home city costs 100 CNY, then it would be six times more expensive in Beijing.

Beidaihe is a very famous beach on the BoHai Sea, also a county-level district governed by the prefecture-level city Qinhuangdao.

Beidaihe only has public buses and taxis. There are only a few public bus lines and the bus stations are separated by long distances. Taking a taxi is expensive. There indeed is a brand of public bike, but the minimum price for a ride is 8.8 CNY. In addition, the condition of the bike is too bad to ride. I do see a woman renting e-bikes, but the price is 30CNY per hour. Obviously, the prices of the public bike and the rental e-bike are way higher than the average price in other big cities.

Xingcheng is a county-level city governed by the prefecture-level city Huludao. It only has public buses and taxis. As a “city”, how can it not have public bikes?

Tianjin is the last city on my trip. It is a municipality directly under the central government. I think it has the best balance of the basic daily needs. Transportation, accommodation, food type and price are all fair deals.

If I had to choose one of them to live in, I would definitely choose Tianjin.

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Subways and public bikes are everywhere.

For example, if a standard room in my home city costs 100 CNY, then it would be six times more expensive in Beijing.

Beidaihe only has public buses and taxis.

There are only a few public bus lines and the bus stations are separated by long distances.

Taking a taxi is expensive.

There indeed is a brand of public bike, but the minimum price for a ride is 8.8 CNY.

Xingcheng is a county-level city governed by the prefecture-level city Huludao.

It only has public buses and taxis.

As a “city”, how can it not have public bikes?

It is a municipality directly under the central government.

If I had to choose one of them to live in, I would definitely choose Tianjin.

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Beidaihe is a very famous beach on the BoHai Sea, and also a county-level district governed by the prefecture-level city Qinhuangdao.

In order for most Americans to understand this, you would need to explain what “county-level district” and “prefecture-level city” mean and why this information is significant, as we don’t have these concepts in the US.

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I think the accommodation fees in Beidahe are roughly 1/3 to 1/2 of what it is in Beijing.Thank you very much.

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> When I introduce a city with its administrative level, it is easy for people to know the city's scale. Do you mean that all county-level cities, for example, have roughly the same population?

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> Does the United States only have three administrative levels? The federal government, the state government and the county government? There may be other levels, depending on which state you’re talking about, and which location in that state. But “administrative level” doesn’t even mean the same thing here as it does in China, because we don’t have a centralized government. Much governmental authority is held at the lower levels (the local levels), and the local governments decide how to organize themselves. For example, although 48 of the 50 states have counties, the other 2 do not (Louisiana has parishes and Alaska has boroughs). And even among the 50 states that do have counties, how those are organized and which things are controlled at which level can vary from state to state, and even from county to county within a single state. Even terms like “city” mean different things depending on the context, and the fact that something is officially called a city doesn’t tell me anything about its size: there are cities with populations smaller than 3,000, and others with populations in the millions.

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Cities on This Trip Beijing is the capital of China, also one of four first-tier cities in China.


Cities on This Trip Beijing is the capital of China, and also one of four first-tier cities in China. Cities on This Trip Beijing is the capital of China and also one of four first-tier cities in China.

“First-tier city” doesn’t mean anything in particular in English, except some vague notion that these cities are somehow more prominent than others.

The transport system in Beijing is very convenient.


Subways and public bikes are everywhere.


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Food there, I think, is also acceptable-expensive ones and cheap ones are all offered.


Food there, I think, is also acceptable-expensive ones and cheap optiones are all offered. Food there, I think, is also acceptableexpensive and cheap options are all offered.

More natural.

But the accommodation fee is very expensive.


[But the accommodation fee iss | But accommodations] are very expensive. [But the accommodation fees | But accommodations] are very expensive.

For example, if a standard room in my home city costs 100 CNY, then it would be six times more expensive in Beijing.


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Beidaihe is a very famous beach on the BoHai Sea, also a county-level district governed by the prefecture-level city Qinhuangdao.


Beidaihe is a very famous beach on the BoHai Sea, and also a county-level district governed by the prefecture-level city Qinhuangdao. Beidaihe is a very famous beach on the BoHai Sea and also a county-level district governed by the prefecture-level city Qinhuangdao.

In order for most Americans to understand this, you would need to explain what “county-level district” and “prefecture-level city” mean and why this information is significant, as we don’t have these concepts in the US.

Beidaihe only has public buses and taxis.


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There are only a few public bus lines and the bus stations are separated by long distances.


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Taking a taxi is expensive.


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There indeed is a brand of public bike, but the minimum price for a ride is 8.8 CNY.


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In addition, the condition of the bike is too bad to ride.


In addition, the condition of the bikes is too bad to ride. In addition, the condition of the bikes is too bad to ride.

I do see a woman renting e-bikes, but the price is 30CNY per hour.


I doid see a woman renting e-bikes, but the price is 30CNY per hour. I did see a woman renting e-bikes, but the price is 30CNY per hour.

Obviously, the prices of the public bike and the rental e-bike are way higher than the average price in other big cities.


Obviously, the prices of the public bike and the rental e-bike are way higher than the average price in [other] big cities. Obviously, the prices of the public bike and the rental e-bike are way higher than the average price in [other] big cities.

The word “other” implies that you consider this a “big” city, too.

Xingcheng is a county-level city governed by the prefecture-level city Huludao.


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It only has public buses and taxis.


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As a “city”, how can it not have public bikes?


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Tianjin is the last city on my trip.


Tianjin iwas the last city on my trip.itinerary. Tianjin was the last city on my itinerary.

More natural.

It is a municipality directly under the central government.


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I think it has the best balance of the basic daily needs.


I think it has the best balance of theavailable and cost of basic daily needs. I think it has the best balance of available and cost of basic daily needs.

Transportation, accommodation, food type and price are all fair deals.


Transportation, accommodation,s and food type(s) and price(s) are all fair deals. Transportation, accommodations and food type(s) and price(s) are all fair deals.

If I had to choose one of them to live in, I would definitely choose Tianjin.


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