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shoupunk

Nov. 27, 2021

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Last thing I bought by internet

I bought clothes 1 month ago.
That was on Toonzshop.fr (great shop with great quality :D) I bought a grey coat with diagonals buttons. They start on the top left and ends on the down right (start at upon/the top left and ends at down right? That's really hard in French it's "ils commencent en haut à gauche et terminent en bas à droite").
The coat is really hot even if it's thin.
I also bought a purple skirt, this is the first Time i buy a skirt while I'm a 24 years old women !

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Last thing I bought by internet


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I bought closes 1 month ago.


That was on Toonzshop.fr (great shop with great quality :D) I bought a grey coat with diagonals buttons.


That was on Toonzshop.fr ( a great shop with great quality :D). I bought a grey coat with diagonals buttons. That was on Toonzshop.fr ( a great shop with great quality :D). I bought a grey coat with diagonal buttons.

To make the sentence sound more natural, you should combine it with the previous sentence. "I bought clothes one month ago on Toonzshop.fr ( a great shop with great quality :D)."

They start on the top left and ends on the down right (start at upon/the top left and ends at down right? That's really hard in French it's "ils commencent en haut à gauche et terminent en bas à droite").


They start on the topupper left and ends on the dlowner right. (start at upon/the top left and ends at down right? That's really hard in French it's "ils commencent en haut à gauche et terminent en bas à droite"). They start on the upper left and end on the lower right. (start at upon/the top left and ends at down right? That's really hard in French it's "ils commencent en haut à gauche et terminent en bas à droite").

The coat is really hot even if it's thin.


The coat is really hotwarm, even ifthough it's thin. The coat is really warm, even though it's thin.

In this sentence, "warm" sounds more natural than "hot".

I also bought a purple skirt, this is the first Time i buy a skirt while I'm a 24 years old women !


I also bought a purple skirt, t. This is the first Ttime i buy a skirt whileI have bought a skirt, although I'm a 24 -years -old women an! I also bought a purple skirt. This is the first time I have bought a skirt, although I'm a 24-year-old woman!

I bought clothes 1 month ago.


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