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alexwong2164

Oct. 6, 2020

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Today is a real autumn



Last month (September) the temperature still hot!

I go to work is using bicycle.

The journey takes about 20 minutes.

When I arrive the office or return home.

My whole body was cover sweat.

Especially in the morning shift when I return home is around 3 pm.

The heat will discourage to do anything.

But today is completely different.

Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with soft wind.

After return home I take a quick nap without air-condition then I running for 45 minutes.

That kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport.

Let’s build some muscles in this autumn.

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The journey takes about 20 minutes.

But today is completely different.

But today is completely different.


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Today is a real autumn


Today is a really autumn Today is really autumn

Last month (September) the temperature still hot!


Last month (September) the temperature was still hot! Last month (September) the temperature was still hot!

I go to work is using bicycle.


I go to work is usingby bicycle. I go to work by bicycle.

To say how you travel, say "By ...." So if you ride a bicycle, you go "by bike". If you drive a car, you go "by car". If you ride the train, you go "by train". If you take a ferryboat, you go "by ferry".

The journey takes about 20 minutes.


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When I arrive the office or return home.


My whole body was cover sweat.


MWhen I'd arrive at the office or return home, my whole body was covered in sweat. When I'd arrive at the office or return home, my whole body was covered in sweat.

"When I arrive the office or return home" is not a full sentence. It is a subordinate adverbial clause telling "when". Combine with next sentence to be correct.

Especially in the morning shift when I return home is around 3 pm.


EThis is especially intrue for the morning shift, when I return home isat around 3 pm. This is especially true for the morning shift, when I return home at around 3 pm.

The heat will discourage to do anything.


The heat will discourage to dos people from doing anything. The heat discourages people from doing anything.

Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with soft wind.


Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with softthere was a gentle wind. Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but there was a gentle wind.

After return home I take a quick nap without air-condition then I running for 45 minutes.


After returning home, I takeook a quick nap without air-conditioning then I went running for 45 minutes. After returning home, I took a quick nap without air-conditioning then I went running for 45 minutes.

That kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport.


Thatis kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport. This kind of weather is the best for outdoor sport.

Let’s build some muscles in this autumn.


Let’s build some muscles in this autumn. Let’s build some muscles in autumn.

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