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my classmate and play for Macbeth

I saw my classmate for the first time afer the break.
she was absent for two weeks, and she said she just came back yesterday.
If I were her, I couldn't come to school after the day that I came back.
I had to play for Macbeth in front of people. Everyone's play was amazing, and it make me feel worry if I could act like them. So, I was very nervous. But I tried my best.
I made a letter as a prop that represents lady Macbeth. Most people had props, and some people brought their own fake swords or the crowns from their home.
I did my play today, so I can afford to prepare for the tests next week now. But I don't want to do.

I expected that me and my classmates would watch the videos about Kramps festival as well as today, but I didn't watch.

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So, I was very nervous.

But I tried my best.

I made a letter as a prop that represents lady Macbeth.

my classmate and play for Macbeth


mMy classmate and play for Macbeth My classmate and play for Macbeth

Always capitalise the first letter of a sentence

I saw my classmate for the first time afer the break.


I saw my classmate for the first time after the break. I saw my classmate for the first time after the break.

Even better than "after the break" would be "since before the break".

she was absent for two weeks, and she said she just came back yesterday.


sShe was absent for two weeks, and she said she just came back yesterday. She was absent for two weeks, and she said she just came back yesterday.

Always capitalise the first letter of a sentence.

If I were her, I couldn't come to school after the day that I came back.


If I were her, I cwouldn't come to school after the day thatafter I came back. If I were her, I wouldn't come to school the day after I came back.

Couldn't = it would be impossible for you Wouldn't = it is not something you would want to do You could also phrase it as: "I wouldn't come back to school straight away like she did."

I had to play for Macbeth in front of people.


Today, I had to act in the play for "Macbeth" in front of people. Today, I had to act in the play "Macbeth" in front of people.

Everyone's play was amazing, and it make me feel worry if I could act like them.


Everyone's playacting was amazing, and it makde me feel worryworried about if I cwould be able to act like them. Everyone's acting was amazing, and it made me worried about if I would be able to act like them.

Make --> made for past tense, to agree with the "was" earlier in the sentence. Generally you worry ABOUT something or you feel worried ABOUT something.

So, I was very nervous.


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But I tried my best.


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I made a letter as a prop that represents lady Macbeth.


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Most people had props, and some people brought their own fake swords or the crowns from their home.


Most people had props, and some people brought their own fake swords or the crowns from their home. Most people had props, and some people brought their own fake swords or crowns from home.

You can just say you brought something "from home" in this context. For example, "Today I brought my lunch from home to save money" or "Today I brought some fruit from home to share with everyone."

I did my play today, so I can afford to prepare for the tests next week now.


I did my play today, so now I can afford to prepare for the tests next week now. I did my play today, so now I can prepare for the tests next week.

Afford is typically talking about cost, usually in money but sometimes more abstractly. It is not necessary here, as you are talking about your ability to do something, which is just covered by saying "I can... [do X]", ie. "Now I can study because I have more time available."

But I don't want to do.


But I don't want to do. But I don't want to.

If you're going to use "do" you need to specify WHAT you are doing. For example, here you could say "But I don't want to do that." Or you could just say you don't want to, as we already know what you are talking about from the previous sentence.

I expected that me and my classmates would watch the videos about Kramps festival as well as today, but I didn't watch.


I expected that me and my classmates would watch the videos about Krampus festival as well as today, but Iwe didn't watch them. I expected that me and my classmates would watch the videos about Krampus festival as well today, but we didn't watch them.

Me and my classmates --> "we" makes more sense here than "I" "In the end" would be a great idiom to use here: "..., but in the end we didn't watch them."

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