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It´s funny how I can stay forgo two weeks without a new post and, but then in just one week I can write even three stories.

But I have thise feeling ofthat something will happen today, and it´ll be a very good anecdote.

Well, the next narrative occurrstory happened aton Saturday 26th April.

"Narrative" isn't exactly incorrect, it's just very unnatural sounding

For more context, my friend, Alessandro, invited me and Ivan to go to the village where he lives, which is nearby Tehotihuacan´s pyramids.

The main reason of that invitationfor inviting us was that there was a festival for San Martin.

The festival started aton Sunday, and we went toarrived there at Saturday´s morning, so we needed to find a distraction until tomorrowsomething to do until the next day.

I was taken aback because we could see the pyramids from his house, so I hit onnted at how we could gethave fun that Saturday´s night.

So I brought them around and movedthe area and went to our target place.

Once we were in the place, we looked for a nice joint, t. The best we could afford was a place called "La Malquerida".

We were drinking and telling bad jokes between uamongst ourselves.

Also, we were spectators of a fight, which involved a tall, aggressive and b, Black security guard, who probably was from Cuba, and a short, brawny, and dangerous Mexican guy.

We got back to my friend´s house at 4 am and woke up at 1 pm of the next day.

PThe people in that village were very kind and treated you as if you were one of them.

That Sunday night, I met his female cousins, and I decided that we´re going to become family, t. They awere so beautiful.

I danced with them and got their Instagrams handless, and a kiss from one of them.

Also, I flirted with a gorgeous girl,. I was so damn obsessed with her, but when I asked for her age and, she said she was 16.

At that moment, she destroyed every illusion Ithat I had created of us was destroyed.

She wannats to hang out, but I´m not sure,. I mean, she´s still too young yet.

I´d like to say that we went to sleep at 3 or 4 am, or perhaps we didn´t sleep that night.

We ended up going to sleep at 8 am ofn Monday, and went offleft at 5pm.

If you ever have a chance of going to a party here in Mexico, enjoy it, because it is'll be the best experience you´ll ever have.

Today, Thursday, we three will go to get a drink, and I can affirmdefinitely say that I´ll get back to you guys with a nice post.

Pyramids fFestival

It´’s funny how I can staygo for two weeks without a new post andposting anything, but then in just one week, I can write evenup to three stories.

Go" is more appropriate than "stay" in this context. Also, added a comma after "one week" for better readability.

But I have this feeling ofthat something will happen today, and it´ will be a very good anecdote.

"That" is necessary after "feeling" to make the sentence grammatically correct. "It´ll" should be "it will" for a more formal tone and clarity.

Well, the next narrativestory occurred aton Saturday 26th, April 26th.

"Narrative" sounds a bit too formal here. "Story" is a more casual and natural word. We use "on" for days and "April 26th" is more standard than "26th April."

For more context, my friend, Alessandro invited me and Ivan to goIvan and me to the village where he lives, which is nearby Tehotihucan´acán's pyramids.

"Ivan and me" is the correct word order for this sentence. Also, "near" is a more natural preposition to use here than "nearby." "Teotihuacán" is the correct spelling, and the apostrophe should be used in "Teotihuacán's" for possession.

The main reason ofor that invitation was that there was a festival for San Martiín.

"Reason for" is the correct phrase, not "reason of." Also, "San Martín" should have an accent mark.

The festival started aton Sunday, and we went to there aton Saturday´s morning, so we needed to find a distractionsomething to do until tomorrowhen.

Use "on" for days of the week. "At Saturday´s morning" should be "on Saturday morning." "Distraction" is a bit awkward here; "something to do" is more natural. "Until tomorrow" should be changed to "until then" to avoid confusion.

I was taken aback because we could see the pyramids from his house, so I hit oncame up with an idea for how we could gethave fun that Saturday´s night.

"Hit on" is an informal expression that doesn’t work well here. "Came up with an idea" is more natural. "Get fun" should be "have fun." "Saturday´s night" should be "Saturday night" (no possessive form).

So I brought them around and movedwe went to our target placedestination.

"Brought them round" is not idiomatic in English. "Brought them around" or simply "we went" is clearer. "Target place" should be "destination."

Once we were in the placthere, we looked for a nice joint, tplace. The best we could afford was a place called "La Malquerida"."

"In the place" should be "there" for clarity. "Joint" is informal and can have a negative connotation, so "place" is better here. "LaMalquerida" should have a space between "La" and "Malquerida."

We were drinking and telling bad jokes between usto each other.

"Telling bad jokes between us" is not grammatically correct. The correct phrase is "to each other."

Also wWe were also spectators of a fight wichthat involved a tall, aggressive, and bBlack security guard, who was probably was from Cuba, and a short, brawny, and dangerous Mexican guy.

"Wich" should be "which," and it’s more natural to use "that" when referring to an event. "Black" should be capitalized when referring to race. "Who probably was" should be "who was probably."

We got back to my friend´’s house at 4 am.m. and woke up at 1 pm of.m. the next day.

"Friend´s" should be "friend’s" with the correct apostrophe. "A.m." and "p.m." should be lowercase and have periods.

People in that village were very kind and treated yous as if youwe were one of them.

"You" should be "us" to be consistent with the plural subject.

That Sunday night, I met his female cousins, and I decided we´ were going to be family, t. They are so beautiful.

"We´re" should be "we were" for past tense consistency. "They are so beautiful" should be a new sentence for clarity.

I danced with them and got their Instagrams handless and a kiss from one of them.

"Handless" should be "handles".

AI also I flirted with a gorgeous girl,. I was so damn obsessed with her, but I asked for her age, and she said she was 16.

"Gorgeus" should be "gorgeous." The sentence should be split for clarity, and a comma is needed after "obsessed with her."

At that moment, she destroyed every illusion I created ofhad about us.

"Created of us" is awkward. "Had about us" is a more natural way to phrase it.

She wannats to hang out, but I´’m not sure,. I mean, she´’s too young yet.

"Wanna" should be "wants to" for proper grammar. "Yet" is unnecessary in the last sentence.

I´’d like to say that we went to sleep at 3 or 4 am, p.m. Perhaps we didn´’t sleep that night.

"A.m." should be used here, and the sentence needs a period at the end for proper punctuation.

We ended up going to sleep at 8 am.m. ofn Monday and went offleft at 5p p.m.

"On Monday" is the correct phrase here. "Went off" is awkward, so "left" is more natural.

If you ever have athe chance tof going to a party here in Mexico, enjoy it, because it is the best experience you´’ll ever have.

"Have a chance of going" should be "have the chance to go." "You´ll" should be "you’ll."

Today, Thursday, wthe three of us will go to get a drink, and I can afconfirm that I´’ll gret backurn with a nice post.

"We three" should be "the three of us." "Affirm" is not commonly used in this context; "confirm" is more appropriate.

See yaou!

"See ya" is informal, and "See you" is more standard for writing. But this is fine.

Pyramids fFestival

It´’s funny how I can stay forgo two weeks without writing a new post, and then in one week I cansuddenly, I’ll write even three stories in one week.

But today I have this feeling ofthat something will’s going to happen today, and it´’ll be a very goodmake for a great anecdote.

Well, the next narrative occurred atAnyway, the following story took place on Saturday 26th, April 26th.

For morsome context,: my friend, Alessandro invited me and Ivan to go tovisit the village where he lives, which is nearby the pyramids of Tehotihuacan´s pyramids.

The main reason ofor thate invitation was that there was ae festival ofor San Martiín.

The festival started aton Sunday, and we went to there atsince we arrived on Saturday´s morning, so we needed to find a distraction until tomorrowwe had to find something to do until the next day.

I was taken aback becausethat that we could see the pyramids from his house, so I hit onthen I came up with an idea for how we could gethave some fun that Saturday´s night.

So I brought them round and moved to our target place.I called them over and we headed out toward our destination.

Once we were in the placgot there, we looked for a nice joint, the bestgood place to hang out. The best option we could afford was a place called "“La Malquerida".”

"joint" is correct, but kind of old-fashioned lol.

We were drinking and telling bad jokes between ueach other bad jokes.

Also we were spectators of a fight wich involvedt one point, we witnessed a fight between a tall, aggressive and black security guard, who probably was from Cuba, and a short, brawny and, dangerous Mexican guy.

Even though nobodNo one really won, but the fight was mind-blowing to watch.

We got back to my friend´'s house at 4 am and woke up at 1 pm of the next day.

People in that village were verreally kind and treated you as if you werus like one of themir own.

That Sunday night, I met hiAlessandro’s female cousins, and I decided we´’re going to be family, —they awere soall beautiful.

I danced with them and, got their Instagrams handless, and even got a kiss from one of them.

AI also I flirted with a gorgeous girl,. I was so damnhonestly kind of obsessed with her, but when I asked for her age and, she said she was 16.

At that moment, she destroyThat instantly crushed every illusion I had created ofabout us.

Still, weWe still keep in touch.

She wannats to hang out, but I´’m not sure, —I mean, she´s’s still way too young yet.

I´’d like to say that we went to sleep at 3 or 4 am, perhap that night, but the truth is we didn´’t sleep that nightall.

We ended up going to sleepbed at 8 am ofn Monday and went off atoke up around 5 pm.

If you ever have a chance tof going to a party here in Mexico, enjoy it, because it isdon’t miss it—it’s one of the best experiences you´’ll ever have.

TAs for today, (Thursday), wthe three will go to get aof us are going out for drink,s andgain. I can affirm thatlready tell I´’ll getbe back with a nice postnother great story.