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Daily Life: Part 17

Long time no see, guys. I have been delivering food for 5 days. Of course, I have to admit I got some money that I have prepared for my tuition studying abroad. Yesterday was a rainy day, and I drove my e-bike throughout half the city. I met a lot of my colleagues when I was riding. An interesting thing was that I got lost in the shopping mall. Since I am almost due on my delivery time, I am kind of anxious. You can imagine it as if you were stuck in a strange place, you couldn't have gotten out the right exit way. What a pity. I tried to ask someone for help, but most of them were really busy. You know, the lunch time. Finally, I remembered a signal shop, and I arrived at my destination on time. HO~, what time is it? It's delivery time! Here we go!😊

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Daily Life: Part 17

Long time no see, guys.

I have been delivering food for 5 days.

I tried to ask someone for help, but most of them were really busy.

HO~, what time is it?

It's delivery time!

Here we go!😊

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Sept. 16, 2025

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You can imagine it as if you were stuck in a strange place, you couldn't have gotten out the right exit way.


You can imagine it asImagine if you were stuck in a strange place, you cwouldn't have gotten out the righcorrect exit right away. Imagine if you were stuck in a strange place, you wouldn't have gotten out the correct exit right away.

I tried to ask someone for help, but most of them were really busy.


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You know, the lunch time.


You know, the lunch time. You know, lunch time.

Alternatively, you can write "You know: lunch time."

You know, the lunch time.

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Daily Life: Part 17


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Long time no see, guys.


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I have been delivering food for 5 days.


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Of course, I have to admit I got some money that I have prepared for my tuition studying abroad.


Of course, I have to admit I've got some money that I have[quite(?)] some money prepared for my tuition studying abroad. I have to admit I've got [quite(?)] some money prepared for my tuition studying abroad.

I might be being picky, but I think something sounds a bit unnatural here. It sounds like you are actively getting some money when I think you mean you have it prepared. Also, "Of course, I have to admit" sounds a bit confusing to me and I'm not sure what it means in this context. Admitting something is usually about something embarrassing, OR it sounds like you're suggesting the money that you saved here is a pretty big amount (which you might need to give more context to make it clear that this is what you mean, and it's a little strange to use "Of course" for having to admit something).

Of course, I have to admit the fact that I got some money that I have prepared for my tuition studying abroadsaved up that I can use for my tuition. Of course, I have to admit the fact that I got some money saved up that I can use for my tuition.

Yesterday was a rainy day, and I drove my e-bike throughout half the city.


Yesterday was a rainy day, and I drove my e-bike throughout half the city. Yesterday was a rainy day and I drove my e-bike throughout half the city.

I met a lot of my colleagues when I was riding.


I met a lot of my colleagues when I was riding. I met a lot of my colleagues when I was riding.

work colleagues or? 同学 doesnt really have an english equivalent, u can say like classmates or associates

An interesting thing was that I got lost in the shopping mall.


An interesting thing that happened was that I got lost in the shopping mall. An interesting thing that happened was that I got lost in the shopping mall.

Since I am almost due on my delivery time, I am kind of anxious.


Since I am almost due onlate for my delivery time, I am kind of anxious. Since I am almost late for my delivery, I am kind of anxious.

What a pity.


What a pitySigh. Sigh.

可怜 doesnt have an equivalenmt in english rlly

Finally, I remembered a signal shop, and I arrived at my destination on time.


Finally, I remembered a signalthat there was an electronics shop, and because of that, I arrived at my destination on time. Finally, I remembered that there was an electronics shop and because of that, I arrived at my destination on time.

whats a signal shop? you mean like a shop for getting a phone?

HO~, what time is it?


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It's delivery time!


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Here we go!😊


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