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Importance of Resting

I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.

If I check my time more precisely, I am able to get spare time to read books.

But it isn't possible to use, because I would be totally exhausted if I use the time.

A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day, and I wrote all of them on my note.

Then, I could get the extra 2 hours per day, and I used the time more productively.

However, I got tired and finally I was burnt out.

After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except my rest.

With the experience, I understood this sentence.

"It is necessary to have time for grinding an ax"

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I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.

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However, I got tired and finally I was burnt out.

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I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.

If I check my time more precisely, I am able to get spare time to read books.

With the experience, I understood this sentence.

"It is necessary to have time for grinding an ax"

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I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.

However, I got tired and finally I was burnt out.

With the experience, I understood this sentence.

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However, I got tired and finally I was burnt out.


However, when I tried this I got tired and finally I waseventually burnt out. However, when I tried this I got tired and eventually burnt out.

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However, I got tired and finally I wasI was eventually burnt out. However, I got tired and I was eventually burnt out.

However, I got tired and finally I was burnt out. However, I got tired and was burnt out.

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I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.


I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read. I want to read as many books as possible, but there is not enough time to read.

'I can't find the time to read.'

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I want to read as many books as possible, but there is notI never have enough time to read. I want to read as many books as possible, but I never have enough time.

In a sentence like this, it's more natural to say "I never have enough time," or "I don't have time," instead of "there is not enough time."

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If I check my time more precisely, I am able to get spare time to read books.


If I checkmanage my time more preciseffectively, I a'm able to getfind some spare time to read books. If I manage my time more effectively, I'm able to find some spare time to read books.

If I checkmanage my time more precisely, I amwill be able to gethave spare time tofor reading books. If I manage my time more precisely, I will be able to have spare time for reading books.

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If I checkmanage my time more precisely, I am able to getcould have spare time to read more books. If I manage my time more precisely, I could have spare time to read more books.

Edited sentence to sound more natural.

If I checkmanage my time more precisely, I am able to getcan have spare time to read books. If I manage my time more precisely, I can have spare time to read books.

But it isn't possible to use, because I would be totally exhausted if I use the time.


But it isn't possi'm never able to useread, because I would be totally exhausted if I use the timedid. But i'm never able to read, because I would be totally exhausted if I did.

Not sure what you mean. Also try and avoid to start sentences with 'But'.

But ithis isn't possible to use, because I would be totally exhausted, if I usewas active all the time. But this isn't possible, because I would be totally exhausted, if I was active all the time.

But it isn't possible to use it, because I would be totally exhausted if I would use the time. But it isn't possible to use it, because I would be totally exhausted if I would use the time.

But ithe free time I currently have isn't possible to use for this purpose, because I would be totally exhausted if I use the timedid. But the free time I currently have isn't possible to use for this purpose, because I would be totally exhausted if I did.

The sentence is a little unclear using the pronoun "it." I changed "it" to "the free time I currently have," and adjusted the sentence as well, to provide more clarity.

But it isn't possible to use, because I would be totally exhausted if I use theall of my time. But it isn't possible, because I would be totally exhausted if I use all of my time.

A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day, and I wrote all of them on my note.


A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day,monitor how I spend my time and I wrote down all of themmy activities/tasks on mya note. A few years ago, I tried to monitor how I spend my time and I wrote down all of my activities/tasks on a note.

A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day, and I wrote all of them on my noteI use my time, and I wrote down all my activities. A few years ago, I tried to check how I use my time, and I wrote down all my activities.

A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day on my activities, and I wrote all of them down on my note. A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day on my activities, and I wrote all of them down on my note.

I don't know if you meant something like that but it'd make more sense in my opinion

A few years ago, I tried to checkmeasure how much time I spent aper day, and I wrote all of them o doing things, and I documented the time in my notebook. A few years ago, I tried to measure how much time I spent per day doing things, and I documented the time in my notebook.

A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day, and I wrote all of them on my notedown. A few years ago, I tried to check how much time I spent a day, and I wrote all of them down.

Then, I could get the extra 2 hours per day, and I used the time more productively.


Then,I found that I could get thean extra 2 hours of reading done per day, and if I used themy time more productively. I found that I could get an extra 2 hours of reading done per day if I used my time more productively.

Then, I couldwas able to get the2 extra 2 hours per day, and I used the time more productively. Then, I was able to get 2 extra hours per day, and I used the time more productively.

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Then, I could get theBy planning, I could schedule an extra 2 hours per day, and I used thecould use my time more productively. By planning, I could schedule an extra 2 hours per day, and I could use my time more productively.

Then, I could then get thean extra 2 hours per day, andwhich I used the time more productively. I could then get an extra 2 hours per day, which I used more productively.

After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except my rest.


After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except mytry not to read/work during my spare time and use it to rest. After that, I try not to read/work during my spare time and use it to rest.

After that, I have tried not to use themy spare time except myonly for resting. After that, I have tried to use my spare time only for resting.

Or "I have tried not to use my spare time for anything else except my rest".

After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except myfor resting. After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except for resting.

After that, I have tried not to use theat spare time except myto rest. After that, I have tried not to use that spare time except to rest.

After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except myfor resting. After that, I have tried not to use the spare time except for resting.

With the experience, I understood this sentence.


With themy English experience, I was able to understooand thise following sentence.: With my English experience, I was able to understand the following sentence:

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With the experience, I understood this sentence.: "It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe." With the experience, I understood this sentence: "It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe."

When presenting a quote like this, it is more common to use a colon [:] rather than a period [.] Then, you can add the quote directly after the colon. No need for a separate sentence.

WitThrough theat experience, I understood this sentence. - Through that experience, I understood this sentence -

"It is necessary to have time for grinding an ax"


"It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe" "It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe"

"It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe" "It is necessary to have time for grinding an axe"

"Ax" - American, "axe" - Canadian, British spelling

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